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Will You Be There? - a random failed poem


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dazzilitchigirl

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Posted 25 June 2013 - 09:53 AM ( #1 )

It's so easy to tell me we're friends forever.

You don't even have to speak, just type the words and press "send".

If you think I'll believe you just like that,

Then I'll go to my room and try to escape like I always did.

 

When I need you to live up to the title of my friend,

Will you be there, or will it just end?

If I told you everything would you even reply,

Or would you just say everything will be okay, which is a lie?

 

Do you really know anything about me

Do you really know the other side of what I say and what I do?

You don't know every word I say is true.

And like you always did you won't respond to me, will you?

 

When I need you to live up to the title of my friend,

Will you be there, or will it just end?

If I told you everything would you even reply,

Or would you just say everything will be okay, which is a lie?

 

When what I need more than anything is for you to stop laughing

Take something other than yourself seriously for once

You just run away and claim I'm a bad friend

Right when I'm already feeling like nobody wants me here.

 

When I need you to live up to the title of my friend,

Will you be there, or will it just end?

If I told you everything would you even reply,

Or would you just say everything will be okay, which is a lie?

 

When you read this will you know and will you understand

Or will you just yell at me and say that I'm mad at you

It's not about me being angry at you

It's about me needing to be able to trust you

 

When I need you to live up to the title of my friend,

Will you be there, or will it just end?

If I told you everything would you even reply,

Or would you just say everything will be okay, which is a lie?

 

Will you be there or will you run away?

Answer the question, I won't stay.

And don't, just don't, laugh at me next time I try to trust you.



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Posted 26 July 2013 - 03:35 AM ( #2 )

HAHA!  This is about me, isn't it?  Oh well.  It's great but I don't like poems where the lines are all different lengths.



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Posted 11 August 2013 - 08:05 AM ( #3 )

HAHA!  This is about me, isn't it?  Oh well.  It's great but I don't like poems where the lines are all different lengths.

No, that isn't about you. It isn't about anyone. :P