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Look at What I Have

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mrwillythefox

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Posted 02 July 2013 - 09:22 PM ( #1 )

This is something I just wrote after looking back, looking at my current life, and looking ahead.

 

--Look at What I Have--

 

 

Look at what I have
It's beautiful
 
And yet
 
Look at what I had
It was perfect
 
Still
 
Look at what might have been
It could have been the perfect life
 
Now
 
Look at what can be
It's better than perfection
 
Simply because
 
Perfection is a mirage
It is unflawed, unbroken
 
Thus concluding that
 
What I have is imperfect
And that is why it's beautiful

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Posted 04 July 2013 - 12:57 PM ( #2 )

This has a good, raw tempo to it.

 

I like it.


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