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we last left our pals as they escape a nother fate of death! and a 
has just joined the group!
Our heroes are now zooming through space still looking for a new home, the small hitodetchi was now crying and our our heroes have no idea what to do! "Maybe it's sad.." Amie suggested. "Well duh it's sad it's crying Amie!" Maxine shot back. Maxine slapped Amie and the hidodetchi giggled. "Hey, I think it liked that.." Maxine thought out loud. Maxine repeatedly slapped Amie making the the young Hidodetchi cry with laughter! Literally! The Hidoetchi was crying again! "Maybe it's lonely" Ricky suggested while gulping down the food supply. The Hidodetchi stopped crying and stared at Ricky. "I know!" Amie blurted out while snatching mushed grapes from Ricky, "It's hungry" Amie carefully fed the small hidodetchi and sang for him and in no time it was asleep! "we should name it" Amie suggested. "How about Loser!" Maxine said while forming an L with her fingers and placing it against her forehead. Amie punched Maxine in the stomach and decided, "Let's name him Hito! Like in HIDOdetchi only with a T!" everyone agreed, except Maxine of course. "So his name is Hito!" Just then Hito woke up and started shivering and sobbing. "What is it???" Amie said while rushing to it's aid. In a burst of light Hito evolved! Wait??? WHAT?!?!?! I'm sorry Amie says it's now a Kuribotchi! (
) So it basically DEvolved! weird... anyway Amie was surprised, "This wasn't supposed to happen!?!?!" She screamed and with all the screaming Hito of course started crying so Amie ran over to it and comforted it! (I'm sorry this isn't so exciting right now!) Everyone was too busy watching Amie that no one was steering the ship! And you know what that leads to CRASH! The space ship crashed! Amie walked out while cradling sleeping Hito, the place was infested with bone trees! A native potchitchi Told the that this was the potchitchi planet and that is was infested with POISONOUS bone trees planted by devilgotchis! All the potchitchis knew the trees were poisonous but they were tempted to chew on the bones! And the doctors had no cure whatsoever! Our heroes gasped! The potchitchi told them 2 hours after you chew on the bones you die! (they learned that the hard way!) Ricky was already chewing on a bone tree because of course he is a potchitchi! Amie set Hito down and went to examine the trees. Just then a burst of light appeared and Hito was once again a hidodetchi but he was as white as a cloud! He sang a song Amie had sang to him about health and healing! As Hito sang all the Dead and sick potchitchi's (including ricky) were fully cured! And the bone trees were gone! Then Hito floated back down to the ground and turned back into a kuribotchi and was fast asleep! Amie ran over to Hito and hugged him causing him to wake up and cry XD BURN!!! As Amie sang Hito back to sleep the native Potchitchis loaded into their ships and got ready to follow our heroes. Speaking of our heroes as they loaded back into the ship Amie noticed another Kuribothchi sitting there! how cute!
Thanks to
Sister Wolf
For the bone tree/potchitchi idea! *Bows to Sister wolf* BOW DOWN TO THE LORD! Lol
PM me an idea so you can help my story end in part 10 maybe even part 15 or 20!
has just joined the group!Our heroes are now zooming through space still looking for a new home, the small hitodetchi was now crying and our our heroes have no idea what to do! "Maybe it's sad.." Amie suggested. "Well duh it's sad it's crying Amie!" Maxine shot back. Maxine slapped Amie and the hidodetchi giggled. "Hey, I think it liked that.." Maxine thought out loud. Maxine repeatedly slapped Amie making the the young Hidodetchi cry with laughter! Literally! The Hidoetchi was crying again! "Maybe it's lonely" Ricky suggested while gulping down the food supply. The Hidodetchi stopped crying and stared at Ricky. "I know!" Amie blurted out while snatching mushed grapes from Ricky, "It's hungry" Amie carefully fed the small hidodetchi and sang for him and in no time it was asleep! "we should name it" Amie suggested. "How about Loser!" Maxine said while forming an L with her fingers and placing it against her forehead. Amie punched Maxine in the stomach and decided, "Let's name him Hito! Like in HIDOdetchi only with a T!" everyone agreed, except Maxine of course. "So his name is Hito!" Just then Hito woke up and started shivering and sobbing. "What is it???" Amie said while rushing to it's aid. In a burst of light Hito evolved! Wait??? WHAT?!?!?! I'm sorry Amie says it's now a Kuribotchi! (
) So it basically DEvolved! weird... anyway Amie was surprised, "This wasn't supposed to happen!?!?!" She screamed and with all the screaming Hito of course started crying so Amie ran over to it and comforted it! (I'm sorry this isn't so exciting right now!) Everyone was too busy watching Amie that no one was steering the ship! And you know what that leads to CRASH! The space ship crashed! Amie walked out while cradling sleeping Hito, the place was infested with bone trees! A native potchitchi Told the that this was the potchitchi planet and that is was infested with POISONOUS bone trees planted by devilgotchis! All the potchitchis knew the trees were poisonous but they were tempted to chew on the bones! And the doctors had no cure whatsoever! Our heroes gasped! The potchitchi told them 2 hours after you chew on the bones you die! (they learned that the hard way!) Ricky was already chewing on a bone tree because of course he is a potchitchi! Amie set Hito down and went to examine the trees. Just then a burst of light appeared and Hito was once again a hidodetchi but he was as white as a cloud! He sang a song Amie had sang to him about health and healing! As Hito sang all the Dead and sick potchitchi's (including ricky) were fully cured! And the bone trees were gone! Then Hito floated back down to the ground and turned back into a kuribotchi and was fast asleep! Amie ran over to Hito and hugged him causing him to wake up and cry XD BURN!!! As Amie sang Hito back to sleep the native Potchitchis loaded into their ships and got ready to follow our heroes. Speaking of our heroes as they loaded back into the ship Amie noticed another Kuribothchi sitting there! how cute!Thanks to
Sister Wolf
For the bone tree/potchitchi idea! *Bows to Sister wolf* BOW DOWN TO THE LORD! Lol
PM me an idea so you can help my story end in part 10 maybe even part 15 or 20!
