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I'm Sorry (old random poem but not a repost :D)

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Posted 28 March 2014 - 11:49 AM ( #1 )

This is a poem I wrote ages ago but didn't want to post until now. It doesn't really indicate how I feel now, it's about how I felt at the time (about a year ago). The shape was always meant to be like that, it was written for the sentences to be the right length for that shape. I only added the colour now though because it looks nice. To me, anyway. :P

 

Sorry.

I'm sorry.

I'm sorry, everyone I hurt.

I'm sorry, everyone I bullied.

I'm sorry, everyone I annoyed.

I'm sorry, everyone I tried to break.

I'm sorry, everyone I took revenge on.

I'm sorry, everyone I took my anger out on.

I'm sorry, everyone I failed to be friends with.

I'm sorry, everyone I said bad things about.

I'm sorry, everyone I made feel unhappy.

I'm sorry, everyone I had fights with.

I'm sorry, everyone I ever insulted.

I'm sorry, everyone I let down.

I'm sorry, everyone I lied to.

I'm sorry.

Sorry.



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Posted 28 March 2014 - 09:58 PM ( #2 )

Very nice :) It's good that you feel sorry o3o


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Posted 29 March 2014 - 08:43 AM ( #3 )

Very nice :) It's good that you feel sorry o3o

I don't feel sorry...I said, this was how I felt about a year ago, when I wrote it. This poem was not written recently and does not describe my current feelings about anything. Thanks for the positive feedback though. :)



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Posted 29 March 2014 - 08:46 AM ( #4 )

Ok, it's good that you FELT sorry :P



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Posted 29 March 2014 - 04:02 PM ( #5 )

The colours you added look nice ;)


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