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If I had died yesterday

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Posted 09 June 2014 - 07:05 AM ( #1 )

Here's just a random rubbish poem thing I wrote and I don't even.

 

 

 

If I had died yesterday

 

If I had died yesterday

How would things be now?

A different today

It doesn't matter how

 

You'd wonder where I'd gone

You wouldn't yet know my fate

You'd want me to come back

But it would be too late

 

When you find out

I just know you'd cry

I'd miss you too

I never wanted to die

 

And forever after my death

Things would never be the same

All my friends grieving for me

A gravestone with my name

 

If I had died yesterday

You'd be full of sorrow

A different today

And a different tomorrow

 

Each day my heart still beats

Is a blessing, a miracle so true

I don't need heaven just yet

I already have one with you

 


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ChamametchiandMametchi

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Posted 09 June 2014 - 07:11 AM ( #2 )

I'm sorry you feel that way. D:



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Posted 09 June 2014 - 06:09 PM ( #3 )

Hm. Not what I expected.

Nice poem.



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Posted 09 June 2014 - 06:49 PM ( #4 )

That's beautiful.  






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