Some supposedly purpose-driven monologue one of my characters needed. It's probably not the prologue.
"'Not the prologue? Then what?' It's simply a prologue—the first of hundreds."
I don't think it's good, either. Thanks for clicking."I don't have to be better than him. It's not so simple.
"If I am sharper, I will have to be. If I am that great of an orator, I should be.
"If I am not, I won't."
"If I'm slower, I don't have to be."
(Edit to include what actually wound up on the page):
"I don't have to be better. It's not that simple.
"If I am quicker, I will have to be. If I'm that well-mannered, I should be.
"If I'm not, I won't be.
"If I'm slower, I won't have to be."
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