furawatchi girl
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*MOVED* from What's On Your Mind? to Tama Fan Fiction*
this is my ghost story! part 1:
Elizabeth Ann Stone looked out of the window of the carrage. The rain trinkling down from the grey sky was in duet with the troting of the horse.
"You are going to love it at the Ron's Miss. Stone!" said Timothy, the carrage driver. Elizabeth groaned. She wished her parents would have sent her to Rachel's house for Christmas vacation, instead of her cracky great aunt Lucy. Rachel was Elizabeth's favorite 13 year old cousin, one year older then 12 year old Ellie. Yes, Ellie. Rachel came up with this short name for Elizabeth. Although most everbuddy, acually, everybuddy frowned upon this system of shorter names and insisted on calling her, "Ms. Elizabeth Ann". Ellie thought about Rachel's house in camparison with Aunt Lucy's. Rachel's was a beige house with marble staircases and a white grand piano in the white livingroom, that they played together on. Ellie smiled thinking about the fun they had together. but that smile setted when she thought of Great Aunt Lucy's old mantion. Every time Ellie went there she would be lost in the cobwebed rooms. One Particular time she got so lost she began to scream, but no buddy could hear her in a house so large. And she was forced to climb out the window to get outside.
that was part 1. there are 5 other pages. there are some spelling erros so be warned! what do you think?
this is my ghost story! part 1:
Elizabeth Ann Stone looked out of the window of the carrage. The rain trinkling down from the grey sky was in duet with the troting of the horse.
"You are going to love it at the Ron's Miss. Stone!" said Timothy, the carrage driver. Elizabeth groaned. She wished her parents would have sent her to Rachel's house for Christmas vacation, instead of her cracky great aunt Lucy. Rachel was Elizabeth's favorite 13 year old cousin, one year older then 12 year old Ellie. Yes, Ellie. Rachel came up with this short name for Elizabeth. Although most everbuddy, acually, everybuddy frowned upon this system of shorter names and insisted on calling her, "Ms. Elizabeth Ann". Ellie thought about Rachel's house in camparison with Aunt Lucy's. Rachel's was a beige house with marble staircases and a white grand piano in the white livingroom, that they played together on. Ellie smiled thinking about the fun they had together. but that smile setted when she thought of Great Aunt Lucy's old mantion. Every time Ellie went there she would be lost in the cobwebed rooms. One Particular time she got so lost she began to scream, but no buddy could hear her in a house so large. And she was forced to climb out the window to get outside.
that was part 1. there are 5 other pages. there are some spelling erros so be warned! what do you think?
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