♥Love♥Song♥ I ♥created♥...♥

It's about when I broke up:

I always loved it when you were their,

And then the time came when your gone,

And it all went wrong,

Just like I had predicted.

When my life is thrown too fine,

I imagine that your mine,

And my heart is filled,

With the love I always loved you with.

Whatever I want,

I have,

I want,

The shooting stars.

Whatever I need,

I have,

When I'm,

With youuuuu.

Follow me inside,

outside,

Through the studded field,

And the moon is shining for you,

With words like I adore you.

Suddenly all the,

sadnest,

Will just slip away,

And you'll see what I mean,

If you follow me in my dreams.

I was searching everywhere,

Suddenly I saw you their,

And my love arrived,

Just where it had came from.

If words meant what they really said,

Our hands would've never been there,

It was always fair,

Cos I only want to protect you.

Whatever I want,

I get,

I want,

To make you feel,

The love I always,

Loved you with,

When we were joined.

Follow me inside,

outside,

Through the studded field,

And the moon is shining for you,

With words like I adore you!

Suddenly all the,

sadnest,

will just slip away,

and you'll see what I mean,

If you follow me in my dreams.

(*Bit of a solo on guitar*)

(*Higher note*)

Follow me inside,

outside,

through the studded field,

and the moon is shinging for you,

cos I'm sure I always loved you,

suddenly all the,

sadnest,

can just slip away,

and you'd see what I mean,

I've always been real keen,

well you'll see what I mean,

If you follow me in my dreams!!!!!!!!!

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That's a longggggg song :furawatchi:

It is a song.I LOVE IT.OMG

Pretty kewl! I think your an awsome songwriter. We need someone like that in our band!!!!!

I was singing it now, not reading, its good, keep it up!

Thank you I just sort of kept it going!

That's a neat song. The way I sang it, it sounded really good. You are an awesome songwriter. I need one of you in my class! LOL

neat song. u should become a songwriter someday!(i am not being sarcastic)

I've been working again:

It's called: Hazel light.

We're walking down the line,

The line I used to know,

Now everything should go,

It made me know you cared.

Hardly should we be here,

It's only a matter of time,

Before the people know,

We're walking in the hazel light.

I can barely breath,

It's eating up my heart,

My hearts attached up to my love,

And my love's attached to youu.

I don't wanna save you from me,

I don't even wanna try.

And once you get into my system,

It's time for us to fly.

But if you walk into the darkened sky,

Our dreams are far above.

But I don't even want to walk into,

the hazel light.

We were like two kids,

the people always stared,

because we were so different,

because we're always there.

If you could see me now,

You'd try to get along,

But if you come to me and give a chance.

I'll be away before you're gone.

I can barely speak,

It's eating up my life,

Life is hanging on to you,

It just can't pass me byy.

I don't wanna save you from me,

I don't even wanna try,

And once you get into my system,

It's time for us to fly,

But if you walk into the darkened sky,

Our dreams are far above,

But I don't even want to walk into,

the hazel light.

I don't wanna hurt you anymore,

I don't wanna kill away the time,

There is only a certain number,

Of times that I have cried.

(*Solo Piano*)

I don't wanna give up anymore,

I don't wanna even try,

But once you hold onto my heart,

It's time for us to cry,

Cos if you give your life to make me happy,

You'll never notice why,

I don't even wanna walk into,

the hazel light.

Those songs are lovely!

Please keep up your song writing.

-illusion-

Nice, do you sing? And play guitar?

it's really good . better than i could ever do.

I can play guitar and electric guitar and i have singing lessons. I CAN ALSO PLAY PIANO.

Madened girl:

I know your all amazed just by the normal ways she's speaking,

And if I had my ways it starts to get more iritating,

I've got the urge to knock you out cos i can't take all this,

And if you bother me it makes me tip you off like this,

Step back,

take one at me,

and you're in,

you're just a madly in love star girl.

You think all lads are in love with you,

But you're mind can't take much more sight of you,

If you can't think and really try,

Then my mind says, "I think i'll tell some guy,

That Star's in love with you!"

I'm really up at you it's making to me little sense,

If you're giving up with trying to make a new best friend,

I know you're thinking that it's hardly that they know you are,

But if you're stopping that it's taking things a little too far.

Step back,

take one look at me,

you win!

you're just a madly dorsons geek, oh

You think all lads are in love with you,

But you're mind can't take much more sight of you,

If you can't think and really try,

Then my mind says, "I think i'll tell some guy,

That Star's in love with you!"

I guess i'll have to wait,

For when your love and life's to be over,

I guess i'll have to wait,

I guess i'll have to wait......

..........oh

(*guitar*)

oy

(*guitar*)

oy

(*guitar*)

You think all lads are in love with you,

But you're mind can't take much more sight of you,

Cos you're just a madened girl,

madened,

madened,

girl,

You're just a madened girl.

*sniff* thats so beautiful. :furawatchi:

OOOooooOOO

The second one is even better! *claps*

-MG23-

It's about when I broke up:
I always loved it when you were their,

And then the time came when your gone,

And it all went wrong,

Just like I had predicted.

When my life is thrown too fine,

I imagine that your mine,

And my heart is filled,

With the love I always loved you with.

Whatever I want,

I have,

I want,

The shooting stars.

Whatever I need,

I have,

When I'm,

With youuuuu.

Follow me inside,

outside,

Through the studded field,

And the moon is shining for you,

With words like I adore you.

Suddenly all the,

sadnest,

Will just slip away,

And you'll see what I mean,

If you follow me in my dreams.

I was searching everywhere,

Suddenly I saw you their,

And my love arrived,

Just where it had came from.

If words meant what they really said,

Our hands would've never been there,

It was always fair,

Cos I only want to protect you.

Whatever I want,

I get,

I want,

To make you feel,

The love I always,

Loved you with,

When we were joined.

Follow me inside,

outside,

Through the studded field,

And the moon is shining for you,

With words like I adore you!

Suddenly all the,

sadnest,

will just slip away,

and you'll see what I mean,

If you follow me in my dreams.

(*Bit of a solo on guitar*)

(*Higher note*)

Follow me inside,

outside,

through the studded field,

and the moon is shinging for you,

cos I'm sure I always loved you,

suddenly all the,

sadnest,

can just slip away,

and you'd see what I mean,

I've always been real keen,

well you'll see what I mean,

If you follow me in my dreams!!!!!!!!!

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The chorus is from sonic heroes! and so is the shooting stars bit!!! that song has most bits from that sonic heroes song "Follow me!" You used most of that copyrighted song!!

~SG~

Sonic Heroes - Follow Me

the second and third one was good though!

~SG~

WOW! :furawatchi:

You write BRILLIANT songs Motorola!!! :furawatchi: