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Amizura

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 02:14 PM ( #1 )

I know Tamatalk is probably full of song writiers, but i think it can hold one more! :(

Here's my song. :blink: It's called, "Looking Forwards"

*slow music* What I thought was a dream....
Was actually real it seems
Tears form behind my cheastnut eyes
Yet I still don't cry
It's simply time to say goodbye

Chours:
I never look behind me
Deep down in the past
I always look straight foward
Boy we're going way to fast
Into the future I can't see
Will it cradle me?
What will the beyond hold?
I must be strong and bold

A lullabye I sing
Before every midnight fling
I start dancing in the moonlight
Till the ending night
How long will this last?
Until I look in the past

I never look behind me
Deep down in the past
I always look straight forward
Boy we're going way to fast
Into the future I can't see
Will it cradle me?
What will the beyond hold?
I must be strong and bold

*raindrops* I stare into the rain
Feeling all the pain
It's happening again
I can feel it
Growing stronger
Past or present
Future's longer
I'm filling full of fear
But I never shed.....a tear


What do you think? v.v

Love, Amizura

Edited by Amizura, 17 December 2006 - 02:15 PM.


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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:09 PM ( #2 )

wow thats an awsome song i love it good job

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:11 PM ( #3 )

wow thats an awsome song i love it good job

Thank you so much! :angry:

Love, Amizura

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:13 PM ( #4 )

these things are off topic but i couldnt get the other things to open

1) how long does it take for the v3s to change from the 2nt thing(first after the baby) to the next one)

2) does any one have a care sheet on a indoneasan tree boa please pm me the link im despret!!!!!

if you need any help pm me

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:13 PM ( #5 )

your welcome

did you write music to it yet?

Amizura

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:15 PM ( #6 )

your welcome

did you write music to it yet?

^^

I have. Yes. I know teh exact tune, and it goes perfectly with the flow of the words.

PS: I PM the answers to you wansu! :angry:

Love, Amizura

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:15 PM ( #7 )

these things are off topic but i couldnt get the other things to open

1) how long does it take for the v3s to change from the 2nt thing(first after the baby) to the next one)

2) does any one have a care sheet on a indoneasan tree boa please pm me the link im despret!!!!!

if you need any help pm me

what are you talking about your in the wronge section

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:26 PM ( #8 )

it sucks

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:29 PM ( #9 )

Okay, Djmann, elaborate on why it sucks. Aside to make a person who made a song up feel bad, why do you think the song sucks? Is it because you do not know the beat?

Please explain more than just a 2 word post.

I kinda like the song, though, but it's hard for me to say seeign as I don't have the beat. :/

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:31 PM ( #10 )

Okay, Djmann, elaborate on why it sucks. Aside to make a person who made a song up feel bad, why do you think the song sucks? Is it because you do not know the beat?

Please explain more than just a 2 word post.

I kinda like the song, though, but it's hard for me to say seeign as I don't have the beat. :/

The beat.....well....it's hard to explain. =/

Love, Amizura

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:32 PM ( #11 )

I think the song is good. [/B]Djmann dont be mean.

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:36 PM ( #12 )

Okay, Djmann, elaborate on why it sucks. Aside to make a person who made a song up feel bad, why do you think the song sucks? Is it because you do not know the beat?

Please explain more than just a 2 word post.

I kinda like the song, though, but it's hard for me to say seeign as I don't have the beat. :/

yeah, same here.
it sounded pretty good when i tryied to get it, but some lines dont seem to fit when i put it with my own beat or w/e.

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:36 PM ( #13 )

HII!!!!!!

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 03:38 PM ( #14 )

HII!!!!!!

uh, plz dont spam by posting things like that,
either add coments about the topic, or pm the person u are trying to say hi to.

tnx