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Amizura

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 08:16 PM ( #1 )

Bullied

I stand here today
Staring in the mirror
Knowing deep down I'm not ugly or gay
So why do they bug me,
and everybody else they see?
I'm different, yes
But why does that matter?
I'm merely shorter and fatter
I can't stand what I feel
It's getting hard to deal
I feel like everything is falling down...
Down upon my infamous crown

I used to be pretty
I used to be smart
I used to have everything from a group to a cart
Now I stand here
Lonesome and weak
Knowing the pain will grown stronger
Grow harder
And will keep....
GOING

Nobody helps me
Nobody cares
Why can't they see!?
This isn't right!
This isn't fair!
With every single move I tear
Tear....tear apart
I now have a broken heart

It's not stopping
And never will
The bullies hit me and laugh out loud
I am surrounded by a crowd
They all stared at me, wanting to help me
But if they did they know what they would be
A supporter who sticks up for others
But that wouldn't do
The bullies would snarl and say like thunder,
"Who is the supporter!? Is it you!?"

I am scarred for life
I know how it feels
When people just watch as life turns it wheels
Yet there is a lesson that I have learnt:
Bullying is the worst kind of hurt


Isn't that sad? Bullying sucks B)

Love, Amizura

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 09:05 PM ( #2 )

pretty good.
i'm glad someone else care that people ARE bullied.

thank you.

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 09:27 PM ( #3 )

I have read many poems on this site and in the real world- but never have I seen one a wonderful as this. I like it a lot, because it came from a person that want's to stop the bullying in this world. Thank you and I hope that the message will get across to those that are choosing to engage in bad behavior. B)

//Tama-Love

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Posted 17 December 2006 - 09:36 PM ( #4 )

Oh my that is beautiful. It spoke to me, it came out to me, and wrapped itself around me.
Kids my age and bullying today, it goes beyond words.
This really took me in, it's suck a beautiful poem.
Good Job.

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 01:31 AM ( #5 )

Bravo!
It's fantastic... THAT will get the message out to people that bullying is not right!
It's funny how a poem can speak to people more than words just like music...
I love it!
You shall be well known here for it i'm sure

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 03:28 AM ( #6 )

*Claps* That's a nice poem, It's bound to get the message to people. Speaking from experiance it's horrible to be in the victim's shoes.

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 03:50 AM ( #7 )

Ah, Yes take it from someone with experience...
I heard someone say that he was happy that I was leaving my old school...
Oh those people there were so mean

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 04:01 AM ( #8 )

Bullied

I stand here today
Staring in the mirror
Knowing deep down I'm not ugly or gay
So why do they bug me,
and everybody else they see?
I'm different, yes
But why does that matter?
I'm merely shorter and fatter
I can't stand what I feel
It's getting hard to deal
I feel like everything is falling down...
Down upon my infamous crown

I used to be pretty
I used to be smart
I used to have everything from a group to a cart
Now I stand here
Lonesome and weak
Knowing the pain will grown stronger
Grow harder
And will keep....
GOING

Nobody helps me
Nobody cares
Why can't they see!?
This isn't right!
This isn't fair!
With every single move I tear
Tear....tear apart
I now have a broken heart

It's not stopping
And never will
The bullies hit me and laugh out loud
I am surrounded by a crowd
They all stared at me, wanting to help me
But if they did they know what they would be
A supporter who sticks up for others
But that wouldn't do
The bullies would snarl and say like thunder,
"Who is the supporter!? Is it you!?"

I am scarred for life
I know how it feels
When people just watch as life turns it wheels
Yet there is a lesson that I have learnt:
Bullying is the worst kind of hurt


Isn't that sad? Bullying sucks :mimitchi:

Love, Amizura

Ohh that is very sad. :nyatchi: but it is a good poem and if anyone is a bully they will relize that it hurts and it is very scary.

But you have done very well! well done.

Regards
//RHC

Edit: Spellings :P lol

Edited by Rock Hot Chick, 18 December 2006 - 04:01 AM.


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Posted 18 December 2006 - 05:27 AM ( #9 )

I...I'm speechless. That was so moving, so incredible so...right. I certainly know what it feels like to be bullied and rejected. but i guess we all find our place somehow, sometime, somewhere.

I used to go to a school where it was "cool" to be dumb. I was the smartest person in the whole school, including the grades above me. I came home everyday with bruises on my body and scars on my heart. Then I moved to the school i'm in now. I still don't fit in, i don't think i ever will until i'm at a school with other people that are like me. At this school, the people who are here don't bully, but their like a pack of sheep. One person is the leader, and everyone else follows their lead. There's the occasional indepentent person like me, who stands up to unfair rules and punishment, but those people are quite rare. but i can tell you this now, it is much better not to fit in at a nice school than it is to not fit in at a school full of thugs.

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 05:34 AM ( #10 )

Oh that was brilliant! You are an AMAZING poet! How long did it take you to write and did you copy some bits at all?

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 06:41 AM ( #11 )

Thank you everybody for your friendly comments. ^_^ Yes, bullying is just awful.....I wish it'd stop. Maybe....just maybe....if we start out small, the kindness can spread. If we here at Tamatalk can show others right from wrong, that'll do the world some good. :lol:

Oh and bratztroxg, it took me about a half an hour. I didn't copy any parts :)

Love, Amizura

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 08:40 AM ( #12 )

Oh wow! You can write a poem like that in just half an hour!!!! You have got real talent, girl! :lol:

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 08:44 AM ( #13 )

Bullied

I stand here today
Staring in the mirror
Knowing deep down I'm not ugly or gay
So why do they bug me,
and everybody else they see?
I'm different, yes
But why does that matter?
I'm merely shorter and fatter
I can't stand what I feel
It's getting hard to deal
I feel like everything is falling down...
Down upon my infamous crown

I used to be pretty
I used to be smart
I used to have everything from a group to a cart
Now I stand here
Lonesome and weak
Knowing the pain will grown stronger
Grow harder
And will keep....
GOING

Nobody helps me
Nobody cares
Why can't they see!?
This isn't right!
This isn't fair!
With every single move I tear
Tear....tear apart
I now have a broken heart

It's not stopping
And never will
The bullies hit me and laugh out loud
I am surrounded by a crowd
They all stared at me, wanting to help me
But if they did they know what they would be
A supporter who sticks up for others
But that wouldn't do
The bullies would snarl and say like thunder,
"Who is the supporter!? Is it you!?"

I am scarred for life
I know how it feels
When people just watch as life turns it wheels
Yet there is a lesson that I have learnt:
Bullying is the worst kind of hurt


Isn't that sad? Bullying sucks :lol:

Love, Amizura

*sniff* I almost began to cry. Bullying sucks, indeed, and my friends and I get the worst of it since we're outcasts.

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 01:51 PM ( #14 )

that is a really sad and yet beautiful poem

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 02:18 PM ( #15 )

that made me cry!

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Posted 18 December 2006 - 11:29 PM ( #16 )

Wow Bratztroxg
You said it! That is absolutely amazing Amizura.
I am hopeless at writing poems but OK at the music thing... Poems speak to me it's almost like they're yelling at me to stop the bullying... It's great! yet sad