Recent content by Xima

A prologue is an "opening". Something that happens before the actual story. In other words, it's a chapter in and of itself. I've seen prologues in excess of 20,000 words. There is no actual relation between chapters and prologues. A chapter IS a prologue. There is no actual relation, both being...

More or less? Do you hold any particular feelings on, let's say, calculators? In the end, we just blow the issue of religion out of whack. It's just an issue like any other. And you might not want to take things so literally, dear. Perhaps he just meant that he didn't particularly care for it...

... But 4Chan has ALWAYS been overrun with perverts. In case you didn't realize, there are like... 5 adult-only boards. Bud, 4Chan always has been and always WILL be complete and utter filth. For goodness' sake, the owner likes to believe he's a 10 year old catgirl! Are you sure you've even...

First of all, there are people MUCH worse off than you. You know, those homeless, maimed war veterans living in the streets of Toronto during a freak snow storm with nothing but a hole-riddle coat and a linen blanket? That guy who just got diagnosed with heart cancer? That mom who just learned...

I'm kind of agreeing/disagreeing with Starman on this one. Although it's true that movies don't always have to follow the exact plot of a book, they're allowed to take some liberties. But althoguh I've never seen/read the movie/book, I can see that they cocked it up rather badly. And she is...

Pain. Sorry, dear, but in my brutally honest opinion, that needs a lot of work. Is that an entire chapter? The whole story? Now, onto the actual critique... is this okay... No. Wrong. You're supposed to capitalize words in the title. I DO hope that isn't the title? Now, onto the story...