kandi kween
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Ok here is the summary of my story. Does it sound good? Should i continue with it?
Seeing Into It
Summary:
Melanie is blind. So when she meets Anne, a normal girl, she is shocked to find she could see when she was around her. Melanie finds out that Anne is an orphan and her only relative died in a car accident, she asks her to run away with her. After all to her family she is a burden. In her misery Anne agrees and the two set out on a journey to find themselves, and their pasts. Anne will learn that her parents’ and aunts’ death was not quite accidental, and Melanie will find a special ability in her new found seeing, and that her “family” who thought her such a burden might not be her real family at all…
Seeing Into It
Summary:
Melanie is blind. So when she meets Anne, a normal girl, she is shocked to find she could see when she was around her. Melanie finds out that Anne is an orphan and her only relative died in a car accident, she asks her to run away with her. After all to her family she is a burden. In her misery Anne agrees and the two set out on a journey to find themselves, and their pasts. Anne will learn that her parents’ and aunts’ death was not quite accidental, and Melanie will find a special ability in her new found seeing, and that her “family” who thought her such a burden might not be her real family at all…
