rate the person's poem above you XD

the point of this game is to make a poem and rate the one above you.

i'll start.

tamas rule,

they're cool.

i play with them every day.

they are awesome,

but don't toss 'em,

or else they will fall and break.

...

start!

10/10!! woop woop!!!

okay here's mine (made up on the spot! 8D)

Don't worry when a nail breaks,

Stop fussing about your hair,

Don't tell me about your new pink skirt,

'Cos I don't even care!

Let's roll through the mud,

As fast as we can!

Play soccer and football,

And be Action Man!!! 8D

Um, there wasn't much deep meaning for that poem, but it was basically about a tomboy speaking to a girly girl! Lol! And by the way, I am a very girly girl, and not a tomboy AT ALL, but i thought i'd write a poem about it anyway! Lol!

7/10 o...o Weird.

I sit here by the ocean side,

Watching the waves crashing by,

So far away now.

So far away...

 

I watch as the stars sit in the sky,

And I begin to wonder why,

They're so far away now.

So far away...

 

I see them together,

For now and forever,

So far away now.

So far away...

My friends wanted to make that into a song. o....o

10/10... I LOVE IT!

Roses are red

Violets are blue

Sugar is sweet

And so are you

-LOL. I stole it!

9.9999999/10 (i'm kinda sour! LOL)

one day

i say

HI HOW ARE YOU

...hey

...hey

this poem is cule.

(spelled cool wrong on purpose)

1/10 wth??

I want you mine

Cuz when i see your eyes

Im wanting you to stay

why am i running away

cuz when you hold my hand

I try to pretend that im not feeling like i do

Do you feel it too?

 

When i close my eyes i see you

dont tell me this is wrong

cuz everything makes me think of you

and everything that i wanna do

You know you can see that when you look at me

i want you so tell me now

do you want me too?

9/10 Cool!

Ladies and Gentlemen,

Take My Advice,

Pull down your Knickers,

And Slide on the Ice.

*Got it from a Book called Goggle-Eyes.*

7/10...

I listen to sounds, the sounds in my head.

But now I don't hear sounds, I hear words instead.

They are telling me to do things I don't want to do...

They are trying to tell me I belong with you...

Wow... no matter how short it is... it took me a while to think of... I started with..

"I listen to words inside my,

Slowly, carefully, But I dont hear words, no instead...

Now I hear sounds-"

And i couldn't think of anything else... So I changed it... And I wrote words that rhyme... AND IT MADE SENCE!!

I made this exact topic a little while ago. Would this be considered bumping?

...no

ok...

new poem...

...

10/10...

For gothic... who is me... and i love it.. LOL

Life is a lie.

I take the razor to my wrist,

but it seems like I'll never die.

I'm immune to blood and fears...

I can only wish to be immune to this empty spot in my heart

slowly filling with tears.

5/10 I'm not really into that kinda stuff.

I made this up at school one day, inspired by a remote control. (seriously. My friend and I were playing with a remote control when I thought of it.)

Cheese is yellow

Cheese is blue

Cheese is green

And grey too!

5/10...

I'm just not into cheesey stuff...

I look around my room,

the only thing on my mind is you.

Just wondering if you love me, too.

I look in the mirror just to see,

A reflection looking at me.

Not the girl I want to be.

I changed me...

I don't know me....

I changed me....

For you...

Yeah... That was dumb... Oh well... rate it...

9/10

Roses are red

Violets are blue

You are moving....

THERES NO WAY I'M GOING TO MISS YOU!

Violets are blue

Roses are red

I won't be happy....

UNTIL YOU'RE DEAD!

Wow... I made that up just now, and it's dumb XD

haha 8/10

Lol this is set in a sweet food resturaunt in...the pretty countryside of Europe?

chocolate is rich

cupcakes are sweet

Oooh you get the best view

Can i have your seat?

LOL i just made that up

o.o 3/10

It was a phenomenal drop

And I just could not stop

And it lead you to your death

And I dont know how

It will change anything now

But Im ever so sorry I left

<3 made by meee.

9/10

Roses are red

Violets are blue

This Poem stinks

And so do you

9/10 nice.... But... I DO NOT STINK! XD

This is transparent... Or is it transporant?

That is cold.... Or is it mold?

I like chips.... Or is it lips?

I can do addition... Or is it Oddition?

Subtraction, Cumtraction...

My head hurts now... I'm goin'.

6/10

Take a melody~

Simple as can be~

Give it some words and~

Sweet harmony~

Raise your voices~

All day long now~

Love grows strong now~

Sing a melody of~

Love, oh of Love~

eight melodies :3 (I split a melody up, but I hope you don't mind.)

Cecib