Memetchi vs Makiko

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Once, there was a pretty young Memetchi with the most bouncy, beautiful curl you could ever imagine. She spent hours every day touching it up with strawberry shampoo or a brush or a curler. She was envied by all the other girls in the whole school, and coveted by all the boys. Her locker was overflowing with love notes and roses and chocolates.

And the Memetchi named Ammie lived for a few years of being admired and adored, until one day a Makiko came to town.

The Makiko's name was Gemma, and she was just as gorgeous as Memetchi. The two probably would have been friends, had they both not had a huge competitive streak in them. Both Gemma and Ammie wanted to be the prettiest girl in class, so they started sabotoging each other. Gemma put Jello in Ammie's shampoo, Ammie dyed Gemma's skirt brown, Gemma colored red marks in permanent marker all over Ammie's face, Ammie replaced all of Gemma's purple bows with ugly brown and green plaid ones.

And this went on and on.

Now continue with the story! But I'd like the posts to fit with these

Rules~

♥ Don't be too random (stuff coming alive, stuff appearing out of nowhere, etc)

♥ Don't be too gross (boogers, poo, pee, puke, etc)

♥ Don't be too violent (shooting, breaking bones, punching/kicking violently (but there can be hissy fits and slapping (but not too much)))

♥ Don't be too mean, like really mean hate notes or something.

Don't kill any characters. This is an important rule I want everyone to follow. I've read a few team stories where the first poster just kills everyone and recreates the story. If someone does kill a character, skip that post and pretend it never happened.

♥ If you introduce a new character, like a boy, give him some background information. Say his name, where he was from, etc.

♥ No plot killing. Example: "Oh no, the big bad wolf is attacking the town!" "It's okay I killed him with lazer eyes" If you see this, skip over it and pretend it didn't happen. This one is also just as important as killing a character.

♥ Use correct grammar, spelling, capitolization, and punctuation. Nothing like "i lyke pie lolzzzzz haha omg u didnt do that noo amie souted!!!1!1!1!one!!1!!eleven!!!!1!"

♥ At least four sentences a paragraph.

Yeah, I know that that's a lot of rules, but they're not actually that hard to follow, if you're a good, decent typer with a bit of imagination.

 
Ammie was furious and found the best hair parlor one day. Every day she went to It. Then one day she went to school and she sat down ready for work. " Ok, everyone, I will hand you a maths test. Please write your name on the front." said Mr. Turtle. When Ammie recieved her maths test she began to work. But she drew a picture of Gemma with her hair straight and crying.

 
Gemma glanced over at Ammie to see what she was doing.She saw what she was drawing and Gemma yelled at the top of her longs"Look what Ammie drew!"

 
Ammie ate her maths sheet. Mr. Turtle Gave Gemma Detention For yelling in class.

 
Gemma was so jealous and angry. She started to worry that people would laugh at her because she got detention from Mr. Turtle. She was super angry.

 
so she plotted revenge on ammie but without getting caught so she sneaked to ammie's house while ammie was in the bathroom and put a paint full of a bunch of colors so when ammie was going to leave the bathroom she was going to get splashed with a rainbow of colors and gemma grabbed the camera in her pocket and sat on a near by tree but it camoflauged her because of all the leaves so she poked the gamera through the leaves and was ready for the memetchi to get splashed paint

 
Gemma thought this was the BEST IDEA she had come up with. Ammie slipped on the paint can and fell. Gemma then just snapped the perfect picture of Ammie deced with paint. She sent it to everyone in school.

The next day, Ammie was free of paint, but her hair was a colorful as the rainbow. Everyone was laughing and pointing at her. Gemma poked at her curl. "So I guess my plan worked, Ammie?" "Well, yes it did. Your PLAN WORKED!" Ammie screamed. Everyone was shocked.

 
then Ammie's boy friend how was a togetchi threw a can of the UGLEISET PAINT YOU EVER SAW ON Gemma's head!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i mean the colour

 
Just then, Gemma's boyfriend, named Alex, he was a Kuromametchi, passed by. He saw Gemma with her ugly paint and saw Ammie and her boyfriend laughing. Alex was really mad, and he called the principal. The principal says;" Ammie, you and your boyfriend was sent to the principal's office." Ammie was so mad at Gemma and her boyfriend. Gemma thank Alex and ask him to go with her. Ammie and her boyfriend somehow is in the principal' office. 1 hour later they get out of the principal's office, having a sad face while Gemma and her boyfriend was laughing happily and eating a banana split ice cream. Now, Ammie want to have a "revenge" on Gemma.

 
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Ammie decided to put love notes in her locker,so gemma would get so jelouse.And it worked!Everyone now wanted to be ammies friend,and this made gemma anrgier..So Gemma pretended that she was mega rich.But that didnt help.Well it worked on the boys.Someof them.Then ammie DID become mega rich.Oh no....they were in a beauty shop and they were about to get curly hair when Gemma pushed Ammie into the sun tanning box.Ammies skin turned pink!AMMIE HAD STOPPED PUTTING NOTES IN HER LOCKER,CUZ LOTS OF BOYS WERE ALREADY DOING THAT.

Ammie went to see the gotchi king.She asked for beutiy,loyalty,and creativity.The king gave her a crown and sparkling wings!URA MEMETCHI!Princess Uramemetchi!Her boyfriend dumped her for a furawatchi :angry:

 
Gemma came to the palace and asked the same.Princess Uramemetchi banished her first sight.Upset with her selfishness,the king told her to her leave the palace.So Princess Uramemetchi built an URA PALACE!

 
The Gotchi King sat on his royal throne as the Makiko left with very mixed emotions.

"They say money and wealth cannot buy happiness" Beamed Gemma, as she shot a dirty look at Aimee, the Ura-Memetchi.

Aimee was escorted to school the next day in a royal limousine.

"Dana, Georgie, Prip!" Called out Aimee.

They had ignored her.

"Corey! (Aimee's ex boyfriend)"

He had ignored her

"Well Well Well, look who hasn't got any friends now!" Gemma raised her eyebrows, and pursed her lips.

Aimee let out the most agressive scream.

"AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" She called out, sweat dripping from the tips of her dark mascara covered eyelashes.

Aimee slapped Gemma with all her might. Gemma was stunned, as she felt herself burning a very noticeable crimson.

Mr Canvas ran over with a very angry look on his face. Gemma had fallen to the ground.

Aimee walked away with a heavy hit in her step.

pinkbutterfly

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im new i'll write more.

So Ammie was walking when a new boy asked her out.The new boy was a Rare memetchi all the girls where in love with him.Boy was Gemma mad she was dumped by her boyfriend. :p Everyone stared at the buetiful couple.

 
The next day Ammie was dumped by her boyfriend. He dumped her for a Ura Violetchi

While Gemma was shopping in TamaDepa, she saw the Gotchi Queen, guarded with guards. She said to the guards that she want to talk with the Gotchi Queen. Gotchi Queen says "OK" and they talked

"Okay... What do you want???" asked the Gotchi Queen

"Your majesty, The Gotchi King didnt want me to ask for the same thing that Ammie,The Memetchi says"

As the Gotchi Queen sees that Gemma is so cute (she thinks Gemma is more pretty than Ammie :lol: ) The Gotchi Queen brings her to the Palace. The Gotchi Queen said it to the Gotchi King. The Gotchi King sighes, and give her a packet with stars on it

"This is the Girls Destiny Star. You use it if you press the biggest star"

"Okay, your highness" said Gemma as She walked Home

In Gemma's room, she was super curious with the Girls Destiny Star. She pressed the biggest star in the middle. Soon a star appeared at the top of her head. Then it showered stars everywhere. Suddenly, Gemma, the Makiko was transformed into a Dazzilitchi! She was so happy about it. But suddenly a sound said;

"If you want to transform into yourself again, press the most little star in the packet. You can use it again anytime you want"

The next day Gemma ride her pink motorcycle to school. Now, EVERY girls in school liked her and want to be friends with her. This made Ammie super jealous. No one cares about Ura Memetchi and Ura thingy now, all everyone think was Dazzilitchi Dazzilitchi Dazzilitchi... EVERY boys in school asked her out, but none Gemma accepted. It was noon until a new boy came out.

He was Joshua, a Dreamitchi. When Joshua sees Gemma, he asked her out and Gemma accept it (because they were alike). Everyone watched as the beautiful couple walked, with their little sparkles followed. Well, everyone except Ammie, the UraMemetchi.

(sorry for Memetchi lovers, I just like makiko so much more than memetchi so I make the continueing about Makiko)

 
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Ammie envied Gemma. Every day when she saw Gemma and Joshua together, she turned away, and tried to ignore them. The very thought of Gemma haunted Ammie. Gemma lived in an enormous mansion, right down the road from Ammie's house, near a huge lake.

One day, Ammie was looking out of her window, and saw Joshua walking Gemma home. As they passed Ammie's house, Gemma stuck her tongue out at Ammie, who immediatly flushed red. She watched Joshua wave good-bye to Gemma, then she stormed out of her room, out of her house, and down the road. She banged on the door, and a Ringotchi, one of Gemma's friends, answered the door.

"Who are you, and what are you doing here?" the small Ringotchi squeaked.

"I'm here to see Gemma." Ammie replied firmly. Just then, Gemma was walking down a grand staircase, and smiled maliciously as she saw Ammie.

"Let her in," Gemma said, still smiling. The little Ringotchi scrambled out of Ammie's way, and ran down the hall, leaving Ammie and Gemma in the living room.

"Well, well, well, what a surprise, Ammie. Come on in." she said, gesturing for her to enter the house.

 
As Ammie sat down in the luxurious living room, Gemma sat down and started to brag about all of the stuff she had and her boyfriend, Joshua. Ammie eventually got tired of Gemma gabbering about herself. So she asked if she could see a tour of the mansion. Of course Gemma wanted to brag about the stuff she had, so she showed Ammie the mansion. Soon they passed by, and Ammie saw Gemma's bedroom. Ammie was very curious about it and she sneaked in. It was HUGE! She looked, everywhere she turned was a poster of Dreamitchi, and Jewelry and Diamonds. She dazzled at them until, she saw the Girls Destiny Star on Gemma's dresser. She found a small bag for her to carry the Star and she took it. Then she came out of the bedroom, and started to look for her way out, she saw the small Ringotchi and asked which was the way out. The Ringotchi showed her and Ammie ran straight to her house. Of course, Ammie didn't really know how to use it, so she pressed the small star first, right at that moment, Gemma turned back to a Makiko. Of course she didn't notice. :) :angry: Then Ammie pressed the big star, and then she turned to a Dazzilitchi! She gasped! The next day, she happily skipped to Tamagotchi School......

 
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The next morning, Gemma realized she was no longer a Dazzilitchi, and ran straight to her room to find the Girl's Destiny Star. When she entered the room, she searched everywhere for it, but it was nowhere to be found.

"This can't be happening!" she shreiked. "Where could it be?!" She sat on her bed and immediatly began sobbing. Then she lifted her head, and her face went from sad to enraged.

"Ammie!" she screamed. "She's gonna pay for that!"

Gemma ran down the staircase, and toward Tamagotchi School, her curled hair bobbing in the wind. When she reached the playground, she found a beautiful Dazzilitchi, surrounded by boys. As soon as she spotted Gemma, she began to push through the crowd, and bumped right into Joshua.

"Hi!" he said brightly. "C'mon, the bell's about to ring, Gemma,"

"I'm not Gemma." Ammie said.

"What?" Joshua said, shocked.

Just then, Gemma caught up to Ammie and Joshua.

"Joshua!" she cried.

"Who are you?" he replied.

"It's me, Gemma! And THAT little monster next to you is AMMIE." Gemma said firmly. The two girls began to squabble, and Joshua, not knowing what to do, took a few steps back.

"Well, I don't know who's who, but I was dating a Dazzilitchi, and I intend to keep it that way."

 
Joshua left the two bickering girls. Ammie smiled maliciously at Gemma, who was so frustrated her face turned red. Ammie walked into the school building, leaving the jealous Makiko all alone on the yard.

The rest of the day was not much better for Gemma. She couldn't pay attention in class, and failed every single test they had, and got detention from Mr.Turtle for lashing out at Ammie at lunch. As she walked home, she spotted Joshua and Ammie walking down the road, and quickly hid behind a bush.

"Alright, see you tomorrow, Gemma," Joshua said.

"Ammie. My name is Ammie." Ammie said.

"Sorry, just have to get used to it." Joshua said, giving her a weak smile.

Ammie waved goodbye, and continued walking down the road. She approached her home near the lake, and was ready to open the door when Gemma revealed herself from the bush.

"Hello, AMMIE." she said spat. She noticed, that in Ammie's hand, was the Girl's Destiny Star.

"Hey, that's MINE!" Gemma yelled. She lunged forward, reaching for the Star. It fell from Ammie's hand, onto the road. Ammie fell over, and her back hit the smallest star. She was back to a Ura-Memetchi. The two girls rolled on top of each other, nearing the lake. Gemma had the Destiny Star in her hand, ready to press the biggest star, when Ammie knocked it out of her hand, into the deep blue lake.

 
The destiny star started sinking...Then,Infront of thier eyes,A fish came and gobbled it up.Although,the smallest star was still sitting there...Gemma pushed Amie onto the smallest star!Now,Neither of them were Dazzlitchis.They both ran away crying,Back to there homes.Memetchi had a long,Hard think.Then,Her amazing brain powers kicked in!She thought,

"If the fish ate the biggest star,And now it's dissolved into nothing,Then the second biggest star is now the biggest star!"

She had done it.She had found the solution to the dazzlitchi problem.

 
Once Ammie figured out the problem, she pressed the biggest star and she turned back to a Dazzilitchi. She snickered and decided to visit Gemma. Gemma was in her bedroom, acting like a Drama Queen :D . On the floor crying. :D :D The small Ringotchi knocked on Gemma's bedroom, Ringotchi said that Ammie was here. Of course, Gemma was really angry, so she let her in to start arguing with her. But it was a bad mistake, Ammie came in as Dazzilitchi, and she made sure that she left her Destiny Star in her house. But Gemma was as red as Hinotamatchi, she yelled very loudly, "GET OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!". Ammie skipped out laughing, except for Gemma the red Hinotamatchi. She was practically growling at Ammie for a second, but she tried to not get angry. She wondered if the Gotchi King would give her another Star, but she worried, she wondered if she would be punished for losing the Star. So she thought and thought...........

 
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