Poem about rain

I tried to write something with a rhyme scheme aaaa bbbb cccc dddd and 10 syllables in each line. But I couldn't really get it to fit in with any basic foot. Here it is (oh ya, and there's an incredible lack of puncuation... lol. I wrote it that way and I'm to lazy to fix it now):

Water tumbles from the heavens so fair

sown by the hands of the dark dreary air

nature is frozen in a distant stare

watching the sky for a peak of one glare

The fire of space, the ominous glow

To bring back florescent, musical flow

The beasts of the land and the green that grows

Any of those would be likely to know

The sun has, as always, been birthed once more

Revealing the splendid mountains galore

The heaving of plains have breathing restore

Falcons take flight from the earthy grown floor

Driplets and stragglers will be left alone

Flourishing mildews make living of stone

Creatures arise and untangle their bone

Answering only to time and to throne

Here's one about fishies

Splish, splash

Into the river I dive.

Swim, dash

To the place where they thrive;

Gleaming arrows of water,

The masters of tide

Remembering which and not to ride.

They shine all around me, each a silver star

Forever they’ll be watching our world from afar.

Still don't have names for either. Any ideas?

~SkyCrystal

EDIT: Thought I'd go ahead and add my other poem to this one instead of making another topic.