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It's definitely not one of my best poems, and it's real short. Thoughts/opinions would be nice though?

 

If you could see my soul

Would you see the woe

The pain, the suffering?

To you, it's just a game

I can take the blame

And you'll be on your way

 

Every time you walk out the door

You leave me in this war

The fight between what's right,

What's wrong and what's love

 

If you could see the way I'm torn apart

Would you take it all back?

If you could see just what you've done to me

Would you take it all back?

 

I know we got lost in our lies

It's showing in our eyes

And every single time I try

You leave me with a silent goodbye.

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I like it. It flows together really well and it sounds great ^_^

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