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I really didn't like the other one I posted on here, so here's another one. I know used two of the lines in this in the other one but I kinda liked them and I'm not keeping the other one so I decided to put them in here. ;D

I keep telling them I feel so empty

But it's impossible with all this pain

When there's nothing left to gain

When there's nothing left to say

 

I have a secret, but it's not worth to tell

You won't believe it, but I've been through hell

I've given up on trying to please you

And I can only hope these words will do

 

I dropped everything

The moment you walked in

I let you break my heart

In hope you'd be a part

Of fixing me, but you can't fix me

 

It's confusing to admit

Like the sentences won't fit

I wanted to hurt, just so you'd notice

I wanted to be the one you missed

 

Because whenever you laughed

I had to choose between these paths

The fight between what's right,

What's wrong and what's love

 

It's like loving someone who won't return your gaze

It's like needing someone for the rest of your days

You know about the mess you've made

But you can't do a thing to change

 

With the broken heart you left me

I waited ever so patiently

For someone who could lift me

Just high enough to be what you need

 

Take some time to realign

You're still constantly on my mind

But from the ashes I'll rise

Maybe it's you I can surprise

 

There's nothing better then knowing

Exactly how and where you're going

And before you try

I don't need you to make me smile

 

If there's one thing I've learnt

It's the secret to not get burnt;

Love yourself so no one has to

Because in the end, they never do

 

Now I'm picking up everything

And I won't let you walk in again

I let you break my heart

And you were never a part

Of fixing me, 'cause you can't fix me.

 
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Kendal, you're such an amazing poet!

Your poem seems so real and it flows together really well because you haven't forced any of the rhyming.

It sounds like it's really from the heart. :)

 
Kendal, you're such an amazing poet!

Your poem seems so real and it flows together really well because you haven't forced any of the rhyming.

It sounds like it's really from the heart. :)
This.

 
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