Agent_Nami Well-known member Joined Jan 23, 2012 Messages 48 Reaction score 3 Location Unreality Oct 29, 2014 #1 Could you tell me what you think of this thing I wrote? It involves my OC Tyler and I had just made it up on the spot, but I ended up really liking it.
Could you tell me what you think of this thing I wrote? It involves my OC Tyler and I had just made it up on the spot, but I ended up really liking it.
NineMouse Well-known member Joined Sep 14, 2014 Messages 170 Reaction score 78 Oct 29, 2014 #2 Great start to what would be a great storyline! Grammar mistakes here and there, but this is a rough draft I'm assuming. The premise is very interesting and I like your protagonist.
Great start to what would be a great storyline! Grammar mistakes here and there, but this is a rough draft I'm assuming. The premise is very interesting and I like your protagonist.
