Poetry 2

Okay, since barely anyone liked my first poem, I'll make another. And please don't say you hated it, even if you did. It's rude and hurts my feelings >.<

Sparkling Eyes

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My love is lost

And I am too

What's going on?

I don't know what to do

My sparkling eyes

In the night

You watched them forever

In the light

You smiled at me

Then turned your back

Frowning, snickering

My soul is black

Filled with sadness

I cannot say

What exactly

I felt today

I scream

I cry

But you just turn away

And let me die

Alone, the sadness overtakes me

I cannot even think

My soul is trapped

The world ain't pink

With flowers and candy

And girly-girl things

Life isn't like that

It will never be

I grab the knife

And grip it tight

Saying my prayers

I say goodnight

Forever more, I rest in peace

Beneath the earth I lay

Asleep forever, my soul shall go

You made me die today

Goodbye forever

Will you mourn?

Or will you forget

I was ever born

You made your mark

Was it good or bad?

But why oh why

Would you make me this sad?

I loved you dearly

But you shut me off

So you can watch me

With your friends and scoff

But I know you loved me

Dearly, true

It was true love

True, true blue

They say you hurt the ones you love

You hurt me and hurt me

So isn't it obvious?

Can't you see?

I'm gone now

Goodbye

I'll be watching you

With my sparkling eyes

I totally loved it! gREAT jOB!

it was great!

HOW THE HECK CAN ANYONE NOT LIKE THIS!

whoa.now that is deep.

Yea. don't worru the person who voted 0/0 is jelouse and an idiot cuz it is amazing.

1000000/10

Thanks everyone (except for the people who voted 0/10. That was just uncalled for)

I will be posting more poetry on my blogagotchi, which can be viewed in my profile. I'm making a new poem right now, so wait a bit and it should be up there!

If you don't want people to say they hated it, why post? You're asking for people's opinions on something you're posting, and not everyone is going to have a positive one. If you don't want negative opinions, either don't make it a possibility in your poll or don't ask for opinions in general.

I personally don't like emo-ish poetry.

sowy. i picked 9 cuz it saddens me

that was FABULOUS! and i write some too...