Posted 07 November 2009 - 09:07 AM
No, really it does. Lin takes Kayte clothes shopping and it's funny. Kayte's all "Too frilly" "Too pink" "I dont like long sleves" yeah, Kayte's picky when it comes to clothes. lol
nobutreally. Its really good in Chapter four. And even better in chapter six
Posted 07 November 2009 - 09:10 AM
I guess you have it planned out, then 83
Posted 07 November 2009 - 09:11 AM
Posted 07 November 2009 - 09:12 AM
So it's more harder looking at what to take out rather than what to write.
Posted 07 November 2009 - 09:16 AM
But all I need is the plots. I'm not copying OB word-for-word, plot-for-plot or anything. I just got the basics.
Besides, in the story, like every five chapters (I think) I'm making everything back in the real world for a chapter so the reader gets to understand what's going on back on earth. Makes sense?
Posted 07 November 2009 - 10:10 AM
Posted 07 November 2009 - 10:42 AM
Posted 07 November 2009 - 10:45 AM
ohgawd im an idiot
EDIT: ._. wtf I read over everything in the RP I needed for Chapter six, and I STILL don't effing understand it. Y'know, I'm starting to think I should rewrite the whole thing to add in the plot(s) I already missed, and add characters nessessary for plots. ._. This is p!ssing me off, not funny. What's the point of writing stories if when you delete plots, the other plots don't make scence. ._.
Edited by K Time, 07 November 2009 - 08:01 PM.
Posted 06 December 2009 - 07:56 PM
Posted 07 December 2009 - 05:29 AM
Posted 09 January 2010 - 03:02 AM
thank you for keeping Klaus. :3
When are you gonna post the chapters? DDD: