A little poem by me.

[NeroVen]

X:.:-Twilight Resting-:.:X

By Samantha .C

I never knew these walls would last so long

We always searched together to find out who we are

As our search came to a end

You said this is where our friendship ends

We were suppose to be together

Yet nothing ever lasts forever

I can’t tear these walls down without you

I won’t tear them down without you

As the twilight rests in our palms

How can the water be oh so calm?

We found the eraser to erase our mistakes

But now I know it’s way too late

The sun sets in the mist

All you care about is your list

Keeping track of all my mistakes

Everyone knows that’s just your way

The walls grow tall

No matter what I do they won’t fall

If you wish to bring my tears to a end

Just lend me your hand, and so we can be friends

We shall amend our difference

And so History won’t repeat itself

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Rate? Please? Any comments are welcome.

 

[rachel3802]

Very good.

Though I am not so fond of the repetition in the line:

"We found the eraser to erase our mistakes."