Tamakiddy!!
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Ok, who knows my characters?
Luna ( a new one ;P)
Kaia
Yazi and
Sen
Well, here's a bit about Luna: she's Kaia's best friend and stuff, and this story is based around they're friendship
Here's a bit, and there is not grammar and stuff..
Luna was outside on the back step, throwing a rock in the air. glancing over, she saw Kaia
"Finally!" Luna said, smiling and standing up "What took you so lon-"
"Sen's Dead."
Luna stopped, her mouth opened in shock. Sen was dead? Kaia must of been kidding. but She looked so sad...Luna then remembered: Kaia's a good actor...but the aura of her was so low and depressing
"Kaia, are you..fooling me..?" Luna said.
"Sen's Dead Luna...."
"But she cant be!" Luna said. "She...she cant! if it was a heart attack, she could still of li--"
"Sen's Dead Luna! She's not coming back! You cant change that!" Kaia shouted at her. Luna finally looked at her eyes, there were blood-shot, from probaily crying before "You cant bring her back from the dead! Nobody can!"
Luna bit her bottom lip, trying to stop it from quivvering. She looked at her friend
"So...What are you going to do...?"
Yeah, A Cliffhanger. I have what Kaia's gunna do, but I need to lay it out.
Luna ( a new one ;P)
Kaia
Yazi and
Sen
Well, here's a bit about Luna: she's Kaia's best friend and stuff, and this story is based around they're friendship
Here's a bit, and there is not grammar and stuff..
Luna was outside on the back step, throwing a rock in the air. glancing over, she saw Kaia
"Finally!" Luna said, smiling and standing up "What took you so lon-"
"Sen's Dead."
Luna stopped, her mouth opened in shock. Sen was dead? Kaia must of been kidding. but She looked so sad...Luna then remembered: Kaia's a good actor...but the aura of her was so low and depressing
"Kaia, are you..fooling me..?" Luna said.
"Sen's Dead Luna...."
"But she cant be!" Luna said. "She...she cant! if it was a heart attack, she could still of li--"
"Sen's Dead Luna! She's not coming back! You cant change that!" Kaia shouted at her. Luna finally looked at her eyes, there were blood-shot, from probaily crying before "You cant bring her back from the dead! Nobody can!"
Luna bit her bottom lip, trying to stop it from quivvering. She looked at her friend
"So...What are you going to do...?"
Yeah, A Cliffhanger. I have what Kaia's gunna do, but I need to lay it out.