Absolute_Enigma
Well-known member
Since I get bored sometimes, I decided to start this topic to put in the poems I write. Sure, they won't be the best (especially because I have extreme writer's block), but I'll put everything I've got into them.
This one is titled "The Rose":
I sit in my garden to watch the flowers,
But I could watch that rose for hours.
It sits by a field overlooking the sea,
Its crimson petals bring bliss to me.
But while it may be pretty today,
Its beauty will soon wither away.
What do you guys think of it? I think its kinda short, and kinda boring, what's your opinion? I'll post more soon.
This one is titled "The Rose":
I sit in my garden to watch the flowers,
But I could watch that rose for hours.
It sits by a field overlooking the sea,
Its crimson petals bring bliss to me.
But while it may be pretty today,
Its beauty will soon wither away.
What do you guys think of it? I think its kinda short, and kinda boring, what's your opinion? I'll post more soon.