tia_tama
Well-known member
check out my poem and tell me what you think!!
;;and its not very long either!
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You broke my heart and im on my knees,
watch me bleed would you listen please!?!
I loved you, there's no doubt
without you, IM LEFT OUT!
I gave you my heart,
you tore it apart, you didnt care
ITS NOT EVEN FAIR!
There's nothing left of me,
you took all there is..you basically killed me!
Im useless with no faith- but im gonna except my fait,
to bad i saw you with that other girl- on a date.
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im open to suggestions for improvement!!
;;and its not very long either!
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You broke my heart and im on my knees,
watch me bleed would you listen please!?!
I loved you, there's no doubt
without you, IM LEFT OUT!
I gave you my heart,
you tore it apart, you didnt care
ITS NOT EVEN FAIR!
There's nothing left of me,
you took all there is..you basically killed me!
Im useless with no faith- but im gonna except my fait,
to bad i saw you with that other girl- on a date.
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im open to suggestions for improvement!!