Adjusting To Life Comments

[LeaChaos]

Here you can critique about whatever you want about the story I'm writing.

I'm sure there's lots of spelling mistakes and grammer issues. I did not spell check anything.

Writing is not one of my strong qualities.

Sorry it starts off realllly realllly boring, but that was intentional. I promise you it will get more interesting.

This story is just written out of pure boredom and also to practice my penmanship.... My handwriting sucksssssssssss

(I write out everything in a notebook before I type)

Well, that's all I have to say so critique on~

 

[kuromametchifan123]

Really good so far, I love the story line, I haven't read anything like it yet before, a human turning into a Tamagotchi. I'll be waitng for the next chapter!

 

[tamagotchialice]

OH MY TAMA I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!! MAKE THE SECOND PART ALREADY! IM SOOOO EAGER TO READ MORE!!!!!!!!

YOU

ARE

SO

FLIPPING

AMAZINGLY

AWESOMEEEE!!!!!

 

[LeaChaos]

Yay thank you!

The beggining of the story is kinda influenced by Tamagotchi Corner Shop 3

It'll probably be a few more days before I post part 2. I haven't finished it yet, since I only work on it in my free time.

 

[tamagotchialice]

Oh But how long will it be until you make part two?

P.S. I love the Tamagotchi Corner Shop games! I used to have Corner Shop 2, but I lost it during a move like 3 years ago nand havent found it since <:'( I'll miss it..

P.S.S.Awesome banner for your story!

 

[LeaChaos]

I should either have Part 2 up by this weekend or somethime next week

The Corner Shop games are pretty cute. I have the 3rd one somewhere, but since I was too lazy to look for it I just downloaded the ROM to play on my computer.

Thank you! I was just fooling around with my pen tablet and somehow my banner was born~

 

[Lauredotchi]

Your fanfiction is really, really awesome. I love the original storyline, and can't wait for the second part!

 

[DJYellow22]

Quite like it. I've had a idea like this once.. I used it for a rp with a friend.. Very nice story ^^

 

[tamagotchialice]

I LOVED IT PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASE MAKE MORE!!!!!! D:::::::