balletchi and bubbletchi comments

[bowchilala]

i made my first fanfic just today, and i want you to check it out and comment on it here. there might be typos since im using android to type. it was meant to sorta look like pokemon mystery dungeon . now, i know its sorta boring at first, but i will find a way to improve it and make it more intresting

 

[Eternal Mametchi Fan]

I like it! It is an interesting idea to use your own characters in the story. I look forward to the next part!

 

[bowchilala]

w-wow... thanks!

 

[bowchilala]

i just posted part 2 but its being approved by a moderator so please wait