"Dear You..."

[Goggle-Face]

Can I get some comments on this?

' You [ Faith ] '

 

I had no idea that my happiness wasn’t going to last long.

So I simply knelt down to my approaching fate.

 

I used to have friends beside me.

But my actions made me feel like they left.

Centuries of guilt swallowed up my poor soul.

But I’d grit my teeth and shake off the tears.

 

The feelings I had bottled up for many years,

Made me into this angry person I am now.

I just want someone to listen to me,

And believe that I’m not just a heartless person.

 

I want to hold your hand in my own,

So please don’t leave me, I want to be heard.

 

The real reason I throw all of my real feelings away,

Is because I don’t want to embarrass myself.

Any sense of laughter or smiles makes me cry inside,

Because I know that I will never truly express them.

 

 

Now that I’ve been brought into this new world,

I swear that I’ll try my best for a new life.

I promise that I’ll be as nice as I can be.

Standing higher, right by your side.

 

I had no idea that my happiness wasn’t going to last long.

So I simply knelt down to my approaching fate.

My real feelings were always masked by glares,

Truly I wanted to cry in your arms.

Let me stand by you and make us feel safe.

I swear that I’ll make an effort for peace.

 

[mametchi_luver]

i love this

 

[+[ b r u t a l ]+]

1oooo / 1oooo.

I'll say no more. 8D

 

[Goggle-Face]

Thank you. 83

 

[Oh Star.x]

Amazing.

I love it so much, especially the repetition.

<33

 

[Goggle-Face]

Thank you, I'm glad to hear that. :3

 

[mametchi_luver]

i like how it flows it was good u should right more

 

[Twin]

Beautiful. It was written very nice, such emotion was put into the words. I love every word; it flowed nicely. There were hardly any rough edges or bumps to your poem. Good job.

 

[Maria Prozac]

TK.

You are talented.

I'll say no more.

edit; lolsorry wrong account.

 

[Goggle-Face]

Thank you, Maria <3 /lol