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This is a story similar to warriors. there are 3 tribes instead of 4 clans, and the tribes are made of different animals, not just cats.... and so.... it begins...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~TRIBES
Cat tribe
Leader: Lindsay – Pretty she cat with blue eyes and beige pelt.
Deputy: Megan – Mysterious She cat with flashy green eyes and a bushy tail.
Medicine cat: Dakota – Rusty gold she cat with white paws.
Warriors:
Devon – Big black tom with stripes.
Emily – pretty Tabby she cat with jet-black paws and a red pelt.
Andrew – handsome ginger tom with yellow flecks. He is Lindsay's strongest warrior.
Apprentice: Usman
Graeme – Big white tom.
Apprentice: Justine
Kameron – Big brown tabby tom with white spots here and there.
Apprentice: Hana
Robert - Red tom with yellow bits, and a torn ear.
Shane- tiny-but-strong mane coon tom with huge hind legs,
and sharp teeth.
Apprentices:
Usman: small brown and white tom with one blue eye
Justine: small talkative black she-cat with a brown muzzle.
Hana: pretty she-cat with yellow eyes.
Queens:
Jessie: silver-gray she-cat with blue eyes and white tail.
Elders:
Trevor: Small brown tom with with spots. Retired early due to failing sight.
Dog Tribe
Leader: Jason: once driven out of dog tribe because of Kristina's laws, has half of his tail cut off.
Deputy: Ashely: pretty collie with distinctive black stripes.
medicine dog: Nathan: most of his fur on his face is gone due to mange, his leg was
injured in an accident on the thunder path.
Warriors:
Sean: pretty black sheltie with beige spots on his belly
apprentice: laura
Jared: small red pincer with a long tail.
josh: skittish Grey and white dachshund with a red muzzle.
Derek: very obnoxious brown lab with flaring brown eyes.
Hasan: innocent white corgi; once sentenced to death by Kristina, but was saved by cat tribe.
Apprentices:
laura: huge strong Labrador , her brothers were killed mysteriously, and cat tribe found out later
Kristina had slottered them due to an earlier argument with laura's foster mother (also killed).
Elders:
Stefano: old black shih zu.
Plant tribe
Leader: Erica: Very smart black tailed deer (former leader , Haidyn) :
Deputy: Aaron : handsome elk with blue eyes
Medicen cat: Sean.m : Handsome burly brown tom, formerly from cat tribe.
Warriors:
Michelle: red caribou with white head.
Tyler: Vally boyish deer
Dylan: big ram with black legs
Evan:a wimpy deer that's just full of himself! he loves Erica.
Blood Tribe:
Boulder- Savage gray and brown outcast with two ear length teeth on both sides of his mouth.
Kristina is his best friend.
Outsiders:
Shannon: she-cat that believes the whole forest hates her, very sensitive. The only person she likes is
Lindsay.
Moro: An old dusty yellow she-cat who gave her kits to cat tribe, she is from a tribe in the mountains.
Barley: Huge muscular black tom that live on a farm just over the thunder path.
Smudge: Little brown tom with darker flecks; lives on the farm with barley.
Jonathan: Big burly brown lab that lives near the ocean. Kristina is his younger sister.
Kristina: Huge brown she-dog with sharp yellow teeth and thick claws. formerly dog tribe's leader.
Rachael: hidden somewhere in the mountains from Kristina, she carries a huge bone club as a weapon
and is bigger than Kristina. formerly dog tribes deputy.
Lobo: fierce Doberman with a long tail that was never cut. Has control over many rouges and is a good friend of
Kristina's.
Descendants
It was a beautiful summer day in the forest. With Dog Tribe’s leader gone, everything was
Returning back to normal… or so that’s what they thought.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Lindsay was busy talking with her deputy, Megan. Dakota was bringing herbs back from a trade with plant tribe, and the warriors were training apprentices around the borders…
Usman tumbled after Hana; they were practicing their battle skills. They chased each other up a tree and stood in horror at how far they had came up. Hana and Usman both slid warily back down to safety, giggling.
Lindsay watched from afar with Megan.
“Those Kits are becoming fine warrior material” Megan said smiling.
“Yes, I will have to give them mentors soon. Those two are full of energy” Lindsay remarked.
Lindsay watched as Hana pounced on Usman, and Usman would tumble away.
“The evening patrol should be back now, Lindsay. Should we check?” Suggested Megan.
Lindsay nodded.
“Can you go? I have something to do” Lindsay replied.
Megan padded away murmuring something happily.
Lindsay turned around and walked on. She was going to meet Haidyn at four trees, and she didn’t want to be late. She scurried across the grassy hill, and walked up to four tress. She was alarmed for a moment, because Haidyn hadn’t showed up yet. Lindsay began to worry when she never came, she had to go to plant tribe – something was wrong.
* * * * * * * * * * ** * * * *
When Lindsay reached plant tribe’s border, an eerie silence swept over her. Was plant – tribe always this silent? A slight mist loomed over the ground. Beyond that, bodies; a hundred silent bodies looming over a still figure.
“W…What?” Lindsay saw the bodies were mourning a slow tune.
“That’s… the song of sorrow” One of the small bodies turned their head, it’s eyes were clouded with sorrow and hate mixed together with confusion.
“Why?” One finally said sadly. Lindsay walked though the mist until she could finally see what they were crying about. Lindsay uttered a sad cry too, as she saw why.
“Haidyn! No…!” She said facing the cold leader’s face. All the still warriors looked at Lindsay in dismay.
“She’s… Not… dead…” Cried one. Lindsay head raced, whom were they talking about?
“K…” another started.
“KRISTINA’S BACK!”
* * * * *
Lindsay faced all of her warriors. Lindsay bowed her head.
“What do you have to announce, Lindsay?” Emily mewed.
“All cats of cat tribe” She started. “You are no longer safe at night” All the cats grew wide-eyed with fear.
"Somewhere in this very forest, is a band of dogs, waiting to ambush you all"
"no... oh star tribe, no!" Someone yowled.
"They have managed to kill our peaceful and wise friend, Haidyn. without her, the forest will soon collapse slowly. Patrols must be even more powerful, if we are to survive. No cat will go near the borders, and all cats will be inside their dens by sun fall. also, apprentice and queen dens must be guarded by warriors, Kristina...., she's returned" Lindsay finished.
Silence swept over the crowd of shocked cats.
"Do you mean to say all of us are now on dangerous land?" Andrew growled.
Lindsay flattened her ears and spat, "Are you questioning my word?!" She hissed angrily.
Andrew stepped back and bowed his head "no! never!" he mewed.
Lindsay's expression turned softer.
"I'm sorry, I am just worried. Now, cat tribe is no longer safe"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~TRIBES
Cat tribe
Leader: Lindsay – Pretty she cat with blue eyes and beige pelt.
Deputy: Megan – Mysterious She cat with flashy green eyes and a bushy tail.
Medicine cat: Dakota – Rusty gold she cat with white paws.
Warriors:
Devon – Big black tom with stripes.
Emily – pretty Tabby she cat with jet-black paws and a red pelt.
Andrew – handsome ginger tom with yellow flecks. He is Lindsay's strongest warrior.
Apprentice: Usman
Graeme – Big white tom.
Apprentice: Justine
Kameron – Big brown tabby tom with white spots here and there.
Apprentice: Hana
Robert - Red tom with yellow bits, and a torn ear.
Shane- tiny-but-strong mane coon tom with huge hind legs,
and sharp teeth.
Apprentices:
Usman: small brown and white tom with one blue eye
Justine: small talkative black she-cat with a brown muzzle.
Hana: pretty she-cat with yellow eyes.
Queens:
Jessie: silver-gray she-cat with blue eyes and white tail.
Elders:
Trevor: Small brown tom with with spots. Retired early due to failing sight.
Dog Tribe
Leader: Jason: once driven out of dog tribe because of Kristina's laws, has half of his tail cut off.
Deputy: Ashely: pretty collie with distinctive black stripes.
medicine dog: Nathan: most of his fur on his face is gone due to mange, his leg was
injured in an accident on the thunder path.
Warriors:
Sean: pretty black sheltie with beige spots on his belly
apprentice: laura
Jared: small red pincer with a long tail.
josh: skittish Grey and white dachshund with a red muzzle.
Derek: very obnoxious brown lab with flaring brown eyes.
Hasan: innocent white corgi; once sentenced to death by Kristina, but was saved by cat tribe.
Apprentices:
laura: huge strong Labrador , her brothers were killed mysteriously, and cat tribe found out later
Kristina had slottered them due to an earlier argument with laura's foster mother (also killed).
Elders:
Stefano: old black shih zu.
Plant tribe
Leader: Erica: Very smart black tailed deer (former leader , Haidyn) :
Deputy: Aaron : handsome elk with blue eyes
Medicen cat: Sean.m : Handsome burly brown tom, formerly from cat tribe.
Warriors:
Michelle: red caribou with white head.
Tyler: Vally boyish deer
Dylan: big ram with black legs
Evan:a wimpy deer that's just full of himself! he loves Erica.
Blood Tribe:
Boulder- Savage gray and brown outcast with two ear length teeth on both sides of his mouth.
Kristina is his best friend.
Outsiders:
Shannon: she-cat that believes the whole forest hates her, very sensitive. The only person she likes is
Lindsay.
Moro: An old dusty yellow she-cat who gave her kits to cat tribe, she is from a tribe in the mountains.
Barley: Huge muscular black tom that live on a farm just over the thunder path.
Smudge: Little brown tom with darker flecks; lives on the farm with barley.
Jonathan: Big burly brown lab that lives near the ocean. Kristina is his younger sister.
Kristina: Huge brown she-dog with sharp yellow teeth and thick claws. formerly dog tribe's leader.
Rachael: hidden somewhere in the mountains from Kristina, she carries a huge bone club as a weapon
and is bigger than Kristina. formerly dog tribes deputy.
Lobo: fierce Doberman with a long tail that was never cut. Has control over many rouges and is a good friend of
Kristina's.
Descendants
It was a beautiful summer day in the forest. With Dog Tribe’s leader gone, everything was
Returning back to normal… or so that’s what they thought.
* * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * * *
Lindsay was busy talking with her deputy, Megan. Dakota was bringing herbs back from a trade with plant tribe, and the warriors were training apprentices around the borders…
Usman tumbled after Hana; they were practicing their battle skills. They chased each other up a tree and stood in horror at how far they had came up. Hana and Usman both slid warily back down to safety, giggling.
Lindsay watched from afar with Megan.
“Those Kits are becoming fine warrior material” Megan said smiling.
“Yes, I will have to give them mentors soon. Those two are full of energy” Lindsay remarked.
Lindsay watched as Hana pounced on Usman, and Usman would tumble away.
“The evening patrol should be back now, Lindsay. Should we check?” Suggested Megan.
Lindsay nodded.
“Can you go? I have something to do” Lindsay replied.
Megan padded away murmuring something happily.
Lindsay turned around and walked on. She was going to meet Haidyn at four trees, and she didn’t want to be late. She scurried across the grassy hill, and walked up to four tress. She was alarmed for a moment, because Haidyn hadn’t showed up yet. Lindsay began to worry when she never came, she had to go to plant tribe – something was wrong.
* * * * * * * * * * ** * * * *
When Lindsay reached plant tribe’s border, an eerie silence swept over her. Was plant – tribe always this silent? A slight mist loomed over the ground. Beyond that, bodies; a hundred silent bodies looming over a still figure.
“W…What?” Lindsay saw the bodies were mourning a slow tune.
“That’s… the song of sorrow” One of the small bodies turned their head, it’s eyes were clouded with sorrow and hate mixed together with confusion.
“Why?” One finally said sadly. Lindsay walked though the mist until she could finally see what they were crying about. Lindsay uttered a sad cry too, as she saw why.
“Haidyn! No…!” She said facing the cold leader’s face. All the still warriors looked at Lindsay in dismay.
“She’s… Not… dead…” Cried one. Lindsay head raced, whom were they talking about?
“K…” another started.
“KRISTINA’S BACK!”
* * * * *
Lindsay faced all of her warriors. Lindsay bowed her head.
“What do you have to announce, Lindsay?” Emily mewed.
“All cats of cat tribe” She started. “You are no longer safe at night” All the cats grew wide-eyed with fear.
"Somewhere in this very forest, is a band of dogs, waiting to ambush you all"
"no... oh star tribe, no!" Someone yowled.
"They have managed to kill our peaceful and wise friend, Haidyn. without her, the forest will soon collapse slowly. Patrols must be even more powerful, if we are to survive. No cat will go near the borders, and all cats will be inside their dens by sun fall. also, apprentice and queen dens must be guarded by warriors, Kristina...., she's returned" Lindsay finished.
Silence swept over the crowd of shocked cats.
"Do you mean to say all of us are now on dangerous land?" Andrew growled.
Lindsay flattened her ears and spat, "Are you questioning my word?!" She hissed angrily.
Andrew stepped back and bowed his head "no! never!" he mewed.
Lindsay's expression turned softer.
"I'm sorry, I am just worried. Now, cat tribe is no longer safe"
