Finding the king!

[Ambs]

Hello! I'm the writer of Finding the King! And I'm wondering if anyone would like to give me some feedback. In finding the king there are 10 chapters alltogether and there will be a second book on it. The second Book is when they fianally defeat Gozarutchi And Alice (The girl who is telling the story) becomes the new Queen of Tamatown, but she realizes that she has completely forgotten her family on Earth and needs to go home but she doesnt know how, and not even the king can help her! No more to be said!

Any comments on either of the books?

 

[Ambs]

Anyone???

 

[cakexgotchi_x3]

That's kinda short?

 

[Ambs]

That's kinda short? :furawatchi:

It may be short but there are VERY long chapters!!! It takes me AGES to think it up and then post it here!!!! I get VERY tired!

 

[ingy-ongy]

I like it... but it would be nicer if you spelled words correctly...

But then, you did say you get tired easily!

Hmm, that reminds me of Alice in the Looking Glass...

Anyway, awesome story!

~ingy-ongy~

 

[Ambs]

I like it... but it would be nicer if you spelled words correctly...
But then, you did say you get tired easily!

Hmm, that reminds me of Alice in the Looking Glass...

Anyway, awesome story!

~ingy-ongy~

I trie my best to spell properly! I'm not very good at that! Its a pleasure to know that someone likes my stories, you have mad eme very HAPPYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!