.::Snowy::.
Well-known member
OK, I don't expect to be flattered and I would rather have constructive critscism than lies. But keep it polite please:
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You turned around
When I called your name
I smiled, you frowned
So I knew it weren't the same.
You looked at me
I looked at you
But I didn't see
What I wanted to.
You walked away
And didn't look back
I felt so stiff like I was made of clay
My heart felt like it was going to crack.
My best friends called and asked "Was I OK?"
But something inside me told me not to say
Nothings changed now it's been so long
I just fake smiled and said "hey!"
So there's no possible way to tell
If you rember the girl down the street.
So I shrugged it off, You don't love me,
I wish you well.
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Well, it's not the best but I'm no great shakes at poetry.
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You turned around
When I called your name
I smiled, you frowned
So I knew it weren't the same.
You looked at me
I looked at you
But I didn't see
What I wanted to.
You walked away
And didn't look back
I felt so stiff like I was made of clay
My heart felt like it was going to crack.
My best friends called and asked "Was I OK?"
But something inside me told me not to say
Nothings changed now it's been so long
I just fake smiled and said "hey!"
So there's no possible way to tell
If you rember the girl down the street.
So I shrugged it off, You don't love me,
I wish you well.
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Well, it's not the best but I'm no great shakes at poetry.