Kelly_Clarkson8
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INTRO
Ever since I was born, I was a little "different", At least thats what my Mom said. Me? I consider myself a freak.
You see, I have this strange ability, I can turn invisible. I have control over this power, but occasionally, I just kind of "Slip Away".
My name is Tompson, I'm twelve, and I got to Lakewin Middle School, I live in a small bungalow, and that is where the story begins.
*Beep Beep Beep Beep BEEP* I could hear the ringing of an alarm in my ears. "Shut up! Immawakeee." I mumbled. I yawned, and smacked my alarm. As I slipped out of bed I could hear my Mom yelling to my sister, Claire, probably about wearing too much makeup.
I rubbed my eyes and stumbled down the hall, feeling my way around, I couldn't open my eyes, I was too tired. I shuffled into the bathroom and splashed cold water on my face, grabbed a towel, and looked into the mirror. Aw Man! My dark brown hair was matted to my fore head, I swore, a little bit to loudly it seems.
"TOMPSON MONTRAG! DO YOU NEED TO WASH YOUR MOUTH OUT WITH SOAP?" Mom. "Wasn't me Mum" I replied cleverly "It was Ben!" I always made my sixteen year old brother take the blame.
"BENJAMIN! YOU GET DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW!" I could hear Ben groaning as he walked down the hall. He stopped when he got to the bathroom, which I inhabited. "freakin idiot!" He yelled, as he smacked my head. "OW! Y'FREAK!" Ben Laughed.
Mmm. I was so hungry. I raced down the stairs, tripping Ben as I ran by. I passed Claire on my way to the kitchen. Yep. Eyeliner all over her eyes. Girls. "What are you looking at? You little fungus!" She shrieked "That hideus blob you have on your head!" Claire screamed and through herself into the bathroom. Tompson, I thought, you are so smart.
When I got to the kitchen I slammed myself down into a chair and grabbed the cereal, stuffing handfuls in my mouth at a time. "Tom!" My mom shook her head "We arent barbarians!"
I nodded and sauntered over to the living room, where I sat down on our rock hard sofa.
Only Mum knew about my secret power. Everyone else, including my Father, were clueless. Speaking of Dad, I could hear him yelling at the twins. I skipped awkwardly into the Family Room, where, sure enough, was Dad. And Of course, he was yelling at Samantha and Robbie, the twin seven year olds. Apparently, they were kicking each other.
Dad was yelling for them to stop, but the idiots didn't listen. Dad's short fuse blew, he exploded into a rage of fiery anger, whipping what he had in his hands at the two, luckily for them, it happened to be a newspaper, so they weren't injured.
I laughed and picked up my school bag, and walked towards the door, as I left I could hear the shrieking of my four siblings, and my parents nagging each other. Well....
Welcome to my life..
What do you think? This is just an intro, Is my writing style ok?
Ever since I was born, I was a little "different", At least thats what my Mom said. Me? I consider myself a freak.
You see, I have this strange ability, I can turn invisible. I have control over this power, but occasionally, I just kind of "Slip Away".
My name is Tompson, I'm twelve, and I got to Lakewin Middle School, I live in a small bungalow, and that is where the story begins.
*Beep Beep Beep Beep BEEP* I could hear the ringing of an alarm in my ears. "Shut up! Immawakeee." I mumbled. I yawned, and smacked my alarm. As I slipped out of bed I could hear my Mom yelling to my sister, Claire, probably about wearing too much makeup.
I rubbed my eyes and stumbled down the hall, feeling my way around, I couldn't open my eyes, I was too tired. I shuffled into the bathroom and splashed cold water on my face, grabbed a towel, and looked into the mirror. Aw Man! My dark brown hair was matted to my fore head, I swore, a little bit to loudly it seems.
"TOMPSON MONTRAG! DO YOU NEED TO WASH YOUR MOUTH OUT WITH SOAP?" Mom. "Wasn't me Mum" I replied cleverly "It was Ben!" I always made my sixteen year old brother take the blame.
"BENJAMIN! YOU GET DOWN HERE RIGHT NOW!" I could hear Ben groaning as he walked down the hall. He stopped when he got to the bathroom, which I inhabited. "freakin idiot!" He yelled, as he smacked my head. "OW! Y'FREAK!" Ben Laughed.
Mmm. I was so hungry. I raced down the stairs, tripping Ben as I ran by. I passed Claire on my way to the kitchen. Yep. Eyeliner all over her eyes. Girls. "What are you looking at? You little fungus!" She shrieked "That hideus blob you have on your head!" Claire screamed and through herself into the bathroom. Tompson, I thought, you are so smart.
When I got to the kitchen I slammed myself down into a chair and grabbed the cereal, stuffing handfuls in my mouth at a time. "Tom!" My mom shook her head "We arent barbarians!"
I nodded and sauntered over to the living room, where I sat down on our rock hard sofa.
Only Mum knew about my secret power. Everyone else, including my Father, were clueless. Speaking of Dad, I could hear him yelling at the twins. I skipped awkwardly into the Family Room, where, sure enough, was Dad. And Of course, he was yelling at Samantha and Robbie, the twin seven year olds. Apparently, they were kicking each other.
Dad was yelling for them to stop, but the idiots didn't listen. Dad's short fuse blew, he exploded into a rage of fiery anger, whipping what he had in his hands at the two, luckily for them, it happened to be a newspaper, so they weren't injured.
I laughed and picked up my school bag, and walked towards the door, as I left I could hear the shrieking of my four siblings, and my parents nagging each other. Well....
Welcome to my life..
What do you think? This is just an intro, Is my writing style ok?
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