My poem

[tamaluver977]

Well here it is...

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I speak my mind.

I don’t hold it in.

And when I have something to say,

My mouth begins to spin.

I say what I need to

Without hesitation

My mind races

And begins the formation

Of words I say to you,

It’s what I need to say.

It is “I have been looking for you

This whole entire day!”

Then “I think we need to talk.

This isn’t working out.

After all, I don’t think you understand,

What this relationship is all about.”

Now that I have said,

What I needed to,

I will leave you to be,

And think this whole thing through.

Considering I think,

You are now confused,

About what I have said.

I hope I didn’t start a feud!

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You like? Im not a good poet..

 

[keekster94]

That was very good! lol I rated it a 10!!!!! :kusatchi:

 

[miraclehammer]

Really good, 9/1o

 

[tamatalker101]

1o/1o

 

[tamaluver977]

Thank you all of you. I whipped it up quick, because I was bored.

 

[Monchi]

Do you write poems? I think it's nice 10/10 you should make more!

 

[tamaluver977]

Thanks! I do write poems and storys.

 

[tamaw/pants]

Eh, it just seemed very repetitive.

Try to use different words the next time.

I'm just not a poem fan though, so maybe that's why.

 

[mimitchis_rock13579]

Well here it is...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I speak my mind.

I don’t hold it in.

And when I have something to say,

My mouth begins to spin.

I say what I need to

Without hesitation

My mind races

And begins the formation

Of words I say to you,

It’s what I need to say.

It is “I have been looking for you

This whole entire day!”

Then “I think we need to talk.

This isn’t working out.

After all, I don’t think you understand,

What this relationship is all about.”

Now that I have said,

What I needed to,

I will leave you to be,

And think this whole thing through.

Considering I think,

You are now confused,

About what I have said.

I hope I didn’t start a feud!

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

You like? Im not a good poet..

It's really good, tamaluver977

 

[Locky458]

Very good! A 9, sometimes poems doesn't even make sense to me at school in those textbooks. But I love yours.

 

[oXBrittanyXo]

a 10 lol its nice

 

[tamaluver977]

Thanks everyone!

 

[Miss Matchmaker]

10/10 I love poems, especially that one. It was nice.

I wrote a poem backstage at a school play once and threw it on the floor, cause I thought it was stupid. Eventually, someone found it and everyone was reading it telling me it was good. lol

 

[tamaluver977]

Never misjude yourself is the lesson there!

Thanks about mine. I just whipped it up quick.

 

[tamaluver977]

Who voted 0???

Whoever did please say why.

 

[ta9394]

awesome ! 9/10

 

[Brambleclaw]

Thanks. I still wonder who voted 0.

BTW: I am tamaluver977

 

[mimichi mametchi]

woah. on a scale from 1 to 10, i rate it an eleven!

 

[Brambleclaw]

Thank you!

 

[Brambleclaw]

2 people voted 0? Jeese. Just say why or thats rude to just go by a topic and just say 0.