My poems!

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MY POEMS

 

Time is a never ending thing

as it goes by, you will age

but if I die one day

time will still go on

Time, a complicated subject

Hard to explain

A hard concept to understand

Without time, existence would not go on

For if time leaves us, there will be no love

 

10/9/06

 

Life

Full of adventure complicated

Sad times

It begins, then ends

Love, caring, and nice

You will live long

Life is a privilege

Spend it well

Spend it right

God loves us all

It goes by so fast

So be happy with what you have

Life, enjoy it

 

10/9/06

 

Death

The end of your great adventure

Your spirit is set free

Your love stays behind

While your life comes to an end

If you get sick, sound of death will please your ears death can be a cure to sickness

When you die, pain is scared away

Death can be good

Your soul is free to journey

Death

 

These poems are so deep

 

Love

You can give it

You can take it

Its love

Take it as much as you can

Love, it's so complicated

It even stinks sometimes

It takes time to build

You can only give so much

No matter what

Love will be in your heart

 

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[TamaLover007~]

They're great! Yeah, like you said, they're very deep.

 

[GotchiGirl96]

Yes, very deep, but very excellent. I am not a poem expert, but I'm pretty good with poems and the only thing I have to say to you is just to watch your choice of phrases.

 

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GotchiGirl96 what do you mean?

 

[tamarocka]

Ace_High you have no taste...

 

 

nice poems!!!<3 em all

 

[Tamagirl_Desy]

GOTCHGIRL! XD YOU DID IT AGAIN! This is twice you took the words right out of my mouth today...

It's good, but not excellent. I actually didn't find it very deep. Please, watch the phrases/words you use. Some just don't fit the poem. <_<

Love, Tgd

 

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Actually it isn't a song.

 

[Misery]

No offence, but I didn't find them very deep either, you must watch the words you say, because some do not go with the poem. To tell you the truth you don't need to use very complex words, because then it will just look like a maze/sea of words that don't fit together.

 

[{P}ink {P}earlz]

It's okay.. But I kinda agree with Misery. V.v

 

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Well actually, I was really aiming more for a mysterious kinda ( i can't explain it ) Atmosphere to my poems. I can't xplain it once again. My daddy said he liked them but it's harder to understand them on the Pc for there is no beat .