My Song

[Ronaldo]

I'm not 100% sure if these types of topics are allowed, but I don't think it's on the prohibited topics list, but I have started writing my on song!

These are the lyrics so far...

[intro]

V1] I turn on the radio,

It reminds me of his voice,

I go over and turn it off.

But something tells me,

I should turn it back on.

My mind tells me I should do something else,

And my body tells me that I should just sit here,

And think about him.

Chorus] Cause I'm so sick of the radio right now,

It reminds me so much of his voice,

It makes me really sic to know,

He could be with someone else,

But I just can't bring myself to stop thinking about him.

do, do, do, do, do, sick, sick, sick.

V2] I change the answering phone,

So I can forget about you.

That's it so far, what would you add on it, how would you improve it?

Who would sing it? What should I call it? I'm really sorry if these topics aren't allowed, you can close this if it isn't.

I was just wondering about my song.

 

[x.E s t h e r]

Wrong subforum, love.

That's for the Stuff We Listen To section.

 

[Ronaldo]

Yea. I'm using my brother, Ronaldo's account, so that's why I posted it like that!

Is it? I wasn't so sure! I thought it was just for music that we listened to!

 

[x.E s t h e r]

Yea. I'm using my brother, Ronaldo's account, so that's why I posted it like that!
Is it? I wasn't so sure! I thought it was just for music that we listened to!

Gah, I meant the Stuff We Write section.

 

[Ronaldo]

Gah, I meant the Stuff We Write section.

Yeah!

It would probably belong there!

Do you like it then?

 

[KuChIpATcHi LOLZ]

Wrong subforum, love.
That's for the Stuff We Listen To section.

yuppies agree, ask a guide to move it

hope i was helful !

oh and great song!! you should make a video

 

[tamawho!!??]

Theres a stuff we write section? Were, In the Library part? I can't find it. But the songs great!

 

[Ronaldo]

Thanks Guys!

What else should I add on to it?

 

[Lady_Shay]

^^ There are a couple of typos. You might want to fix that. ;D

It's a good song. Are you a good singer? Then sing it and put it on YouTube for us to hear! If not, then get a friend with a good voice to do it. That's what I would do. My friend Brenda is the greatest rock singer I've met. She's not one of the stupid kids from Camp Rock, she sing's like she's 25.

 

[Ronaldo]

Ok, I'll fix them in a mo.

What way should the tune go like? :?:

I'll try and sing it, I'm no einstein at singing, and I heard I was good, so yu can judge me then! XD

 

[Mazeay]

i think it's an awesome song.

I think u should sing it in a rock tune. Good luck :]

oh yes, and a video would be great too.

 

[ilovekuchipa555]

Cool lyrics. What's the name of the song? ;D

Maybe try to act dramatic when you sing. But then again, don't do what I said xD

Good luck :]

 

[Ronaldo]

Make it into a rock song?

A catchy rock song maybe?

I'll make it probabaly tomorrow cause I have to go out tonight to a party! <_<

I dunno, what shoud I call it?

 

[TAMAGIRL2008]

That's a really cool song! I would sing it-If I could sing.

Maybe you could try and make it rhyme, but that's only if you want to.

I'll see if I Can think of a name for it, I write songs too so you can tell me if you like the title.

 

[TAMAGIRL2008]

Hmm....What about Voice of the radio?

If you don't like it just tell me. I'll see if I can think of another name if you want me to.

 

[.:Charm:.]

that's just like pretty much the same lyrics as "So Sick". Althaough I know that sometimes when you write a song, it ends up sounding like another song. But if that's not the problem, please try to be a little more creative!!

 

[Lady_Shay]

Make it into a rock song?
A catchy rock song maybe?

I'll make it probabaly tomorrow cause I have to go out tonight to a party!

I dunno, what shoud I call it?

Maybe you should sing different tunes and see which one flows with the words the best.

 

[Ronaldo]

that's just like pretty much the same lyrics as "So Sick". Althaough I know that sometimes when you write a song, it ends up sounding like another song. But if that's not the problem, please try to be a little more creative!!

Yeah! I was listening to "So Sick" when I wrote it!

Ok then, I'll try about picking the genre then!!

 

[sunnykamora]

uhhhhhhh urrrr gahhhhhh its...... oka-it sucks

 

[Ronaldo]

uhhhhhhh urrrr gahhhhhh its...... oka-it sucks

I dunno what you're saying,

sorry!

I dun think anyne knows tbh.