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princess08

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[SIZE=8pt]I've been writing songs and such lately, and I just decided to put them up for crit.[/SIZE]

I have shared these on a different forum before, just for the note.

These are NOT for other uses!

(Eh. Since these are just lyrics written by me, I figured it belonged here, since your only reading the lyrics.)

s.o.n.g.s.

Outrage at the -innocent-

Outrage!

We're talkin' outrage.

You never really know, when you'll be,

OUTRAGED!

 

We're talkin' outraged!

At the innocent.

 

Outrage!

Over absolutely nothing.

 

Outraged! Why are you so outraged?

Why do you keep going on, to become..

Outraged!

 

If you, really don't want to be~

Outraged!

Then go join the innocent victims..

of

Outrage!

 

We're talking outrage

No other subject

No other theme.

 

Outrage! Why are you so outraged?

At the innocent.

 

Outrage! Do you even know the proper place.

For that?

 

Outrage! We're talking outrage

At the innocent.

 

Outrage-Do you know the word?

Outrage!

Rise of The Dead

* On a sidenote, I'm not emo, I'm not goth, I'm not suicidal, I'm not punk. I just happen to have random muses. Don't take this as an offense to religion. ;_; It just sounds good.

Shake, the earth and black their eyes.

Never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

 

Shake, the earth and bury them.

Leave them there to rest in peace.

Never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

 

Written down in history.

But never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

 

Spin, the earth and red their lips.

Never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

 

Shake, the earth and black their eyes.

Never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

 

Write, them down in church records.

Never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

 

Remember them as you like to.

But they're never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

 

Shake, the earth and black their eyes.

Condemning them

Never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

 

Into, their place in history.

But never again to rise.

Never again to rise.

Mafia!

*If your in a mafia, which I doubt you are, hurray, a mafia song, but anyways, its based on a book I'm going to write.

Its the

MAFIA!

Better run before they kill you!

Mafia! Better run before they see you!

Run away!

 

Mafia! Shoot you down if your in their way!

 

MAFIA! Thriving in New York

Thriving in New York.

 

Mafia! Have their guns at hand!

Mafia! Don't run into this band!

 

Mafia! Run if you've seen their crimes!

Mafia!

(Not particularly rhymish, I know. Its more of an exclamation than a song.)

 
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I love the second one.

Its so... poetic.

It made me cry, but im overly emotional like that.

Wonderful.

 

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