My story :D

[Tamatoshu2]

I agree with Hippos on the "critisism* to succeed" thing. However, this is quite great for a 12 year old. I'm only thirteen, but I find this is quite similar to the stuff I wrote last year, so I can relate.

Also, she hadn't meant to be rude to Claire, I don't think. I believe she was dissapointed to find so many things wrong with her story, so she over reacted a little bit.

*correct me if I spelled that wrong.