what do you think its just the first pargrah fell free to correct it any idead for the res of the story
Alice woke up what times is it she thought to her self she rolled over to look at her clock 7:00 she better go do the angle ( her horse) she grabbed her jeans and her blue foal t-shirt and ran to the food shed but they only had one biscuit of hay luckily mum had gone to get some more she called angle but she didn’t come so she turned around to take it back to the food shed till she woke up but angle was in her food shed eating the remains of the hay of the ground
Alice woke up what times is it she thought to her self she rolled over to look at her clock 7:00 she better go do the angle ( her horse) she grabbed her jeans and her blue foal t-shirt and ran to the food shed but they only had one biscuit of hay luckily mum had gone to get some more she called angle but she didn’t come so she turned around to take it back to the food shed till she woke up but angle was in her food shed eating the remains of the hay of the ground
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