Noctis High.

[Aquangel]

I would like it if anyone can, like, point out some ways I can improve Noctis High or give some suggestions. If you want to have a character put in it you can fill out the form:

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Thanks.

 

[Runner]

The story is okay and all, the plot is a little bit unoriginal, and it's fine, but what bugs me is the fact Aqua was born and spent her life in the real world, right? Why would her name be "Aquatica Flora Bloom" if she's in a realistic setting? It would have fit better if she grew up in a fantasy world instead of a real life setting, like I assume she did since she knows who Lady Gaga is. There's no way anyone would be named "Aquatica Flora Bloom" in the real world.

 

[Aquangel]

OK, thanks. I'll edit it!