poem

[tamagotchi_pal]

I was babysitting my brother one day

We were running in the park

We were just deciding what to play

When I noticed it was getting dark

 

My dad should have come back at six 'o' clock

But it had already reached half past ten

I couldn't go back - the door would be locked

I had left my phone in the shed.

 

The park keeper came back with a lock

And told us it was time to go home

He locked the park gate shut

And we were left alone

 

It was to dark for me to see my brother

And that is how he ran away

I didn't see him slip off in the black of the night

I didn't see him the next day

 

I got someone to phone the police

I got the police to phone my dad

When he got back, all that he said

Was that my babysitting was bad

 

He seemed to be heartbroken

But not quite to the degree

That he was writing every night

Welcome home letters at half past three

 

But, the police searches were succesful

And after a couple of days - three

My brother was returned, and I gave him

Those welcome home letters.

Written by me.

 

[tama 3445521508]

That's a great Poem.

It must have been scary though.

 

[x.Nobody.x]

[SIZE=7pt]That's amazing, Vivienne. Really.[/SIZE]

 

[tamagotchi_pal]

[SIZE=7pt]That's amazing, Vivienne. Really.[/SIZE]

like, seriosouly

 

Youre so nice about waht I do.

 

[x.Nobody.x]

[SIZE=7pt]Because I love it.[/SIZE]

All of it.

Remember how I said I've never lied on OFF? How that was strange?

I was telling truth about your writing as well.

It's amazing.

And it has more meaning then my things, definately x.x

More then a lot I've ever heard.

It's also amazing because I know how you feel.

 

[tam4 luva]

wow..that was fantastic...although I bet you and your family were very worried when your brother ran away.

Besides the fact that this is actually real, I totally love it!

 

[tamagotchi_pal]

[SIZE=7pt]Because I love it.[/SIZE]
All of it.

Remember how I said I've never lied on OFF? How that was strange?

I was telling truth about your writing as well.

It's amazing.

And it has more meaning then my things, definately x.x

More then a lot I've ever heard.

It's also amazing because I know how you feel.

Thank you.

 

And, sorry.

 

I can't be on OFF for a week.

 

Because I only have a school computer that blocks it.

 

x

 

[GotchiGirl96]

I really like your poems! They have great meaning! And wow, this actually happened?

 

[tamagotchi_pal]

I really like your poems! They have great meaning! And wow, this actually happened?

Yeah, it's true. ^^

 

[cutie_pop]

Wow! 0.0 See? This is why I told my friend that I wasn't as good as other people and not that good enough to be a professional poet. >.<;