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PART 3 IS OUT!

 
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I read the first part yesterday; it looks like it's going to be interesting! I'll read the rest when I get home. :)

 
It's well-written and has a good storyline - it's very hard to get the right amount of description so it doesn't bore the reader but they understand what's happening. The only things I would change are:

  • The involvement of the different characters; all the different people in it should get a turn to solve a problem or mystery
  • The fast moving plot; before one mystery is solved, another pops up and that causes confusion

Other than that, it's a great fan fiction! :)

 
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Part 7 is up, everyone! In this chapter, I open a portal to Dazzmina's ID-L and fight a zombified Mametchi!

 
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