TAMAGIRL2008
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I kind of wanted to write a story. I've started it on a Word Document but some of this will be completely off the top of my head. This is the beginning of a is about a girl who wants to see a place that she read in a book. Her family upset her so she finally....well, I'll let you read it.
Runaway ~ Chapter 1.
My finger gently slipped under the crisp, white pages of the book. A tear rolled down my cheek and lightly dropped onto the page. How many times had I read this book? How many times had I opened the book only to cry once again?
I didn't know.
All I knew was that this was the place I wanted to go. A place that would maybe understand me. A place that would maybe accept me. But all I could do was dream about it. Just think, hope, wish and pray. And that was it.
I sat there and watched as the waves smashed the shore over and over, as the seagulls swooped over me, as the water hit the rocks. I couldn't leave this place. But then again, maybe I could.
I stared down at the book again and then slammed it shut. I stood up and glanced round again at the footsteps that were fading in the sand.
I pushed my brown hair from my eyes and began walking up the beach to the stony path that would lead me home. I looked at the trees that were eerily hanging over the top of me and that made me feel like something was behind me, just watching me, waiting to pounce. It was just about getting dark. The book felt heavy against my chest so I wasn't able to run. I just carried on. Trying not to scream, trying not to cry. I finally reached the white house and walked up the gravel to the blue door. Was I ready to face my brother again? I didn't think so. My brother always teased me and hurt me alot. It was almost pushing me out of the family, making me feel like I didn't exist. Like I didn't matter. I was beginning to think that I couldn't take it any longer.
I was about to turn the handle but something pounced on me before I could. My feeling was right. I had been watched. I dropped the book and screamed my loudest. I thrashed about but the tight grip had me caught. I couldn't go anywhere.
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So that's Chapter 1. As I said, most of this was off the top of my head so advice, comments, praise is all accepted so that I can edit it. I'll probably save it to the Word Document later because I'm not on the right computer. I'll set to work on Chapter 2 and post it soon ok?
Tell me what you think!
Runaway ~ Chapter 1.
My finger gently slipped under the crisp, white pages of the book. A tear rolled down my cheek and lightly dropped onto the page. How many times had I read this book? How many times had I opened the book only to cry once again?
I didn't know.
All I knew was that this was the place I wanted to go. A place that would maybe understand me. A place that would maybe accept me. But all I could do was dream about it. Just think, hope, wish and pray. And that was it.
I sat there and watched as the waves smashed the shore over and over, as the seagulls swooped over me, as the water hit the rocks. I couldn't leave this place. But then again, maybe I could.
I stared down at the book again and then slammed it shut. I stood up and glanced round again at the footsteps that were fading in the sand.
I pushed my brown hair from my eyes and began walking up the beach to the stony path that would lead me home. I looked at the trees that were eerily hanging over the top of me and that made me feel like something was behind me, just watching me, waiting to pounce. It was just about getting dark. The book felt heavy against my chest so I wasn't able to run. I just carried on. Trying not to scream, trying not to cry. I finally reached the white house and walked up the gravel to the blue door. Was I ready to face my brother again? I didn't think so. My brother always teased me and hurt me alot. It was almost pushing me out of the family, making me feel like I didn't exist. Like I didn't matter. I was beginning to think that I couldn't take it any longer.
I was about to turn the handle but something pounced on me before I could. My feeling was right. I had been watched. I dropped the book and screamed my loudest. I thrashed about but the tight grip had me caught. I couldn't go anywhere.
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So that's Chapter 1. As I said, most of this was off the top of my head so advice, comments, praise is all accepted so that I can edit it. I'll probably save it to the Word Document later because I'm not on the right computer. I'll set to work on Chapter 2 and post it soon ok?
Tell me what you think!
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