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Last year I started writing a story called 'Hoshi no Pasu (Path of the Stars) about a 15 year old girl named Aki Hoshimori who has no family and lives in an abandoned house and pays for her school bills with her grades. She lost her memory of when she was younger, all she remembers is waking up on a street with her two dogs Hana and Yukio along with a katana.(it helps later) She has a very strange personality, she's apathetic and normally doesn’t say a word. Her eye easily adjust to the dark allowing her to see and has great sense of smell and sight. One day she decided to run away from everything, try finding another place to live as she's running she falls down a hole into another world called Rerumu. (Realm)
It's got kind of a Alice in Wonderland/Alice no Heart no Kuni theme though it's not a dream and there's probably few parts that have/would have no PG themes like violence, swearing, etc. If I were to upload the story it probably wouldn't be to TT due to these things but yeah....I just wanna know peoples opinions on what you think like is it a bit predictably, if I should change the storyline a little, etc...
It's got kind of a Alice in Wonderland/Alice no Heart no Kuni theme though it's not a dream and there's probably few parts that have/would have no PG themes like violence, swearing, etc. If I were to upload the story it probably wouldn't be to TT due to these things but yeah....I just wanna know peoples opinions on what you think like is it a bit predictably, if I should change the storyline a little, etc...