Midnight shadow
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“Mum I’m home” I said while unlocking the door. She didn’t reply and was now where in sight. I checked upstairs and all the rooms nowhere .I checked outside not there. I stared to worry. I called her mobile some guy picked up. “Hello” he said. “Um” I replied. I start crying. I didn’t know what to do. Then the man said “who are you”. I took a big breath and calmly told the guy Anna brown.” Your Tina brown daughter” he said. “Yes” I replied. I knew what he was going to say next what had she done “Well um she dead’ he said. “What” I yelled into the phone and hung up.
I went in a car to aunt daisy’s I was scared .I hadn’t met her before.
Mums funeral was the week before. The man had called back and told me what was going to happen he said he didn’t how she died. I had picked up some pencils paper food and money.
. Then we where there her husband showed me to my room. I lay there then aunt daisy came in with a dog at he heels and a bird on her shoulder. She said to come outside she had something to show me so I went out side the first thing I saw was a horse black all over except a white patch over on shoulder aunt daisy said “she is yours” I ask her how old she is she replies “5 years old” “what is her name” I say “splash” she says and walks inside
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any one whatn to be an editor
I went in a car to aunt daisy’s I was scared .I hadn’t met her before.
Mums funeral was the week before. The man had called back and told me what was going to happen he said he didn’t how she died. I had picked up some pencils paper food and money.
. Then we where there her husband showed me to my room. I lay there then aunt daisy came in with a dog at he heels and a bird on her shoulder. She said to come outside she had something to show me so I went out side the first thing I saw was a horse black all over except a white patch over on shoulder aunt daisy said “she is yours” I ask her how old she is she replies “5 years old” “what is her name” I say “splash” she says and walks inside
what you think i will right more
any one whatn to be an editor