The Beginning of The End?

[steynj]

I had been working on this story for 3 months, hope you like it!

 

[#mimitchi#]

um not try'n to be rude or harsh but that sounds just like one of AVI's books ever herd of him? well some poeple might thing your copy'n just giving ya the heads up okay? can you make a link plz because some times its hard to find stories in this forum and your story sounds interesting! good luck! some poeples are like that! h34r: