The Tama Who pooed all the time!

[lausaraleen]

I made a story: The Tama who pooed all the time!

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[Chatterbox]

It was...interesting...to say the least. You shouldn't have made it die though.

Chatterbox

 

[lausaraleen]

ok then. *the pooing tama comes back to life* Happy?

 

[Chatterbox]

Yaaay!!!! Make a sequel! *dances happily*

Chatterbox

 

[lausaraleen]

Well I kinda did, its in team storys. You can access it here.

 

[Mametchi 4ever]

It was ok. But no offense, slightly boring. You could have made it longer, and more funny things would have made it worth a laugh. It didn't make me laugh.

 

[tamadanaca]

I found it quite imiture, yes thats the word. Well, It was had no story line. It had lines, but lines or almost random stuff. I'm glad you made it short because even that much didn't even really hold my interesst. To me it seemed like you did it as more of a joke than a piece of literture for people to enjoy.

-sorry,

Tamadanca