What do you think of my 'Disclaimer' story?

[Mutt]

I think it was kinda odd and roughly done, but I want to know what other people think of my work.

 

[chaoticpix93]

I for one would like to see what happens. 1 what the tama does and secondly what happens with the kid aming the toy at himself... ROFL...

Apparently the tama's aggitated by it and I want to know why. LOL

I also have been befuddled by the "do not aim toy at anyone' phraze.