Like everyone else said, you are being somewhat rude, and putting "lol" after something doesnt mean it's lighthearted, even before you brag about your legendaries being so good they're "a different story." Also, unless someone asks you how to do it, saying "And thats how its done," is also rude. For your information, I'm not an amateur. yes, i just recently got white, but i have several other pokemon games, a most of which have been beaten, and some beaten more than once. I'm sure others have also beaten games more than once or twice. Frankly, your team is okay, but take to heart everything everyone has said here about what you say, and also, GotchiGuy has good advice for your pokemon. Try incorporating it into your strategy.