A poem

[~Wildheart~]

Tell me what you think, I'm sending this in to an Amateur Poem Contest:

Creative

Alas unknown

Realistically accident prone

Love as I might

Obsessive I border

Things will never change

Twilight will always remain

Another book on my shelf

Sisterly love has not reached me yet

Although we've had our moments

I wish almost all the time

Not for many things, but a couple in particular

A dream I've heard will never come true

The love of the main character in my book

One hundred times, I'll wish for these

Be honest-- what do you think? (There's a lot behind this, and something hidden in it)

 

[Trainwreck]

Its awesome

I love it<3

 

[samizer0313]

That is really good.

 

[iSango]

If this was based on stars, I'd give it 4/5. It really is a good poem, But I think the topic could be better. No I'm not a twilight hater it's just I think It could be best about something else, other than that it's amazing