Does anybody want to rate my prologue? xD

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SatoHouse

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I've titled it, 'The Vampire and The Human' and it's the tale of a vampire who lurks for prey, only to find that she can't bring herself to feed on her. By accident, she tells the little girl that she'll help her find her mother, and now she's stuck, and can't feed with the little girl watching her every move!

I think it should be rated PG13, but only because of the word equivalent to poop and the whole meaning of it. The prologue's not the best, but I want to see if it would catch a reader's attention.

E-mail me for it, please and thank you,

~Mei :)

{P.S.: If it's too boring, don't worry, I don't expect a review! :) )

 
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