HAS ANYONE SEEN MY FAN FICTION?

[Dotty_Is_Hotty]

It's called Fairy High and it's coming onto number 4. Has anyone read it, and, any suggestions?

:kuribotchi: :furawatchi: :mimitchi: :kusatchi:

 

[Glitter]

I have, it's awesome! I posted a comment about it in fan fic comments (something like that) it rocks.

 

[Kishu Inu]

Smiley over-usage. x_o;;

Your characters seem like cardboard cutouts. You should revise your story and restart completely over.

Not to be rude, but it's downright horrible.

EDIT: You really should find a spellchecker.

 

[princess08]

-eyes burn out from smiley overusage, wrong usage of "XD" and caps-

D:

It hurts.

Anyways, a link, perhaps?

 

[paper*cut]

I don't like it.

I don't understand whats going on x-x Theres a dragon in the room, a girls on myspace, and there freaking out trying to make a portal e-e

To much going on at once.

 

[TamaMum]

If you want members to read your Fan Fiction, please put your request in a signature message and provide a link (also in your signature message). There's no need to make a separate topic about it and comments about can be posted in the Fan Fiction Comments sub forum (as has already been mentioned)..

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